This is great. I've also updated, I know it's been forever, but could you look at it? Report Review
wow, that's some good stuff. you have an excellent story here and you could even expand on that idea a bit, make it into a story and give the character a name. but this is great! i wasn't expecting something this strong out of less than 600 words but you've done a great job!Author's Response: Thank you very much I will think on expanding it. I love your storys by the way Report Review
WOW!!! You are very intense J. I always knew you would write with so much passion. I am sorry.Author's Response: Thank you can't wait to read your story love ya Report Review
Great job!Author's Response: thank you Report Review
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