soo sad and heartfelt...couldn't have a better short story than this

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Wow, this moved me to tears. Brilliantly written.

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That was so sad. I'm not a big sap, but it nearly made me cry. On a "good" scale of one to ten, i give it an easy fifteen! You should consider writing books and stuff.

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Beautiful.

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OMG i've read this story more than once and it still makes me cry everytime xxx beautiful

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loved it.

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You are such an amazing writer! This was so good. I love how close James, Lily and Sirius were to each other. This one made me cry too, it was so sad when the mom came and sang to her baby. Lovely job.

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Amazing, heartbreaking, beautiful story. The line about "poor Harry, he'll never get a break, he'll always have someone watching over his shoulder" struck me as incredibly ironic...

10/10.

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all i can say is that i luved it!!

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This text is really good! I loved reading it!

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This is such a brilliant story, so sad but realistic

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wow. wowie. that was so great... i was starting to get sick of all the cheesy james/lily/marauder stories, but this was so AMAZING!!!! not like any of the others! ur a GREAT author, keep up the awesome work.

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This is such a wonderful story. It is incredibly unique and portrays a different side of the characters than normally seen in fanfiction, yet every moment is completly believable and in accordance with what we know of the characters of Lily, Sirius, and James. I especially enjoyed reading this Sirius.
Also, the plot itself was unique and quite moving. Great idea. The imagery successfully pulls the reader into the story. Readers experience all of the emotion (or, in some cases, as much of it as possible without the personal experience). But even without the personal experience, it is easy to relate to the characters' feelings because the readers are already a part of the story. Wonderful job.
Thanks for the journey. You should be proud.

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Well written- great job.

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Amazing, you made me cry.

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Awesome, really heartbreaking story! That's all I have to say... good job with this one.

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wow this was such a ... i dunno the only word i can think of is powerful!!! i really really liked this line:
He had never feared it and, as a teenager, she often had wondered if he welcomed it. He was the serene Marauder. He refused to be ruffled by even the biggest controversy, preferring instead to take them as they came. He would argue for his beliefs and fight those who opposed them but yet, he was the most loyal of them all. He was willing to go through any torture to protect them all and for that, Lily felt blessed to call him her friend. His willingness to sacrifice his own emotional sanctity so that James didn’t have to face this particular scene each night made Lily’s heart break. What else had he so willing endured to the sake of all of them?...

i loved the way u described him...serene!! not the word most ppl would associate with the "rebelious player" marauder, yet it somehow fits sooo perfectly, this story was wonderfully ritten and really touched the heart! u have a beautiful riting style and i cant wait to read more of ur riting!!

lyl lyl

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I didn't expect it to be such a tear-jerker. But it was wonderful. I'm really enjoying everything you write.

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Awesome story so far; keep it up!

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A wonderfully written fanfic. It's filled with emotions and the characters is portrayed perfectly.

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this was absolutely beutiful! Just.... BEUTIFUL! :)

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This is phenomenal! I cannot believe how well it was written and how incredible the plot was! Please write more and more!

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I thought this was simply brilliant. I don't really know what else to say, except that James was ALSO in hiding, WITH Lily, so Lily wasn't really alone, but it doesn't matter much in this story, because it's so good anyway. I just LOVED this, SO much... yay. =)

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I was so moved by this story I reread it instantly. I have never seen such careful and accurate characterization of Sirius (I know I could never get it as well as you). You've done more than simply write a story here...you've passed on a message, a reality.
It's definately my favorite story.

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its so sweet and sad...

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