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4 Reviews Found

Review #1, by IchigoPan

21st April 2006:

It's a very good and unique start to your story. A couple of spelling and grammatical errors here and there (you have a tendency of run-on sentences here.) I think to make this story better, you can separate your character's thoughts on a separate line with italics. That way, your readers won't get confused as they're reading the descriptions you write and then jumping into the character's thoughts. Keep it up!

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Review #2, by the5thmarauder

The start

24th April 2005:

hiya, sorry it's me again, is there absolutely no chance of like a whole story, i think it would be really good, i love your character!!!!!!!!

Author's Response: tahnks. sorry but i couldn't log on until now, donno why... i plan on posting a next chaper next week:)

Author's Response: i added chapter 2!:)

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Review #3, by the5thmarauder

The start

6th April 2005:

Please write like a whole story, I really like it, I like your character! I've added this to my favourites with the hope that you might extend it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! 10/10

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Review #4, by lilyswatcher

The start

29th March 2005:

brilliant!

Author's Response: i added chapter 2 if you still are interested to read.... hope it survises limbo:)

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