I think that your story is funny but could be better.( no ofence)!!I just think that you should add a little more whrn you are reveiwing!!!

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I enjoyed the entire chapter, I thought it was very well planned out and had a very nice moral to it at the end. I'm smirking because Dudley got what was coming to him! I'm kind of sad that it's only a one-shot though - I would have liked to have seen how the Dursleys handled this and how Dudley reacted to his first day at St. Brutus's. Congrats on a great story! - Jenn

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cute

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i liked it, especially the end. yes it made me smile!

Author's Response: my ears are turning pink.

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I don't usually read one-shots, but this one was excellent.

Author's Response: Thanks a lot for taking a minute for that review. I hope you don't underestimate different types of fics. One-shots can actually inspire a few ideas.

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Ahh! very nice! I love happy endings! I've recently developed more of an interest in one-shots, so this was just right! I actually read it to return your favor for reading my story (Wands of Invention). I really appreciated your review and insights! Thanks very much and keep up the good work! You write it and i'll read it! --Sarah

Author's Response: Thank you Sarah. A response from a favourite author is always highly appreciated. And I am glad that you liked the one-shot. I am not sure if you will check out my response but I hope that you respond to your reviews. I also hope that you finish your fic soon or it will become AU after the release of HBP.

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HA! Very funny. Had a lot of good moments in it. My only suggestion for improvement would be to add line breaks between paragraphs. People can sometimes be intimidated when they see too many sentences crushed together. The little white space between paragraphs is like a calming zone, to say "See? You got through one paragraph and it's not so bad... take a deep breath and read the next one."

Author's Response: Thanks. I have huge exams coming up next Sunday but after that I am free. I plan to improve this fic. I can't tell you how happy I am that one of my favourite authors likes my fic. As for the line breaks, I am such a lover of books that bigger books attract me more. Guess I need to think about the readers more. I will correct it soon. Waiting eagerly for your sequel.

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It's funny and you portray the characters very well. Though you could space it out more. It's all cramped together.

Author's Response: Thanks a lot for the encouraging review. I will try to put an improved version up in a couple of weeks.

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You need to work a bit on your adult dialogue. For instance, Mr. Evans's line at the end would probably say something more like "... report against Dudler Dursley for an assault against my son Mark." Also, dialogue is not the only part of a story and you seem to forget that halfway through. And what on earth happened to Tonks partway through?

Author's Response: Thanks for being my first reviewer with constructive criticism. I never really been in trouble with the law. So I had real trouble thinking about what the officer will say. Tonks deliberately didn't interfere 'coz Harry wasn't in any real trouble. Thanks again.

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that was really funny!

Author's Response: Thanks a lot. Appreciation for your first fan fic feels great.

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Good story. Very funny. Write another one please.

Author's Response: Thanks a lot. You are the first person to review. The other one is a friend. I promise I will write another one. Thanks again.

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Good one. But you need a few more conversations. Made me laugh for sure. Hoping for some new work from you

Author's Response: Thanks a lot. Really appreciated.

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