{reviewid: 2081578, reviewer: 'thegeneralofmusic%40yahoo.ca'}
24th March 2009:
So, is Hermione going to get together with Harry? If this is over, then they had no chance.
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{reviewid: 2081576, reviewer: 'thegeneralofmusic%40yahoo.ca'}
| Review #2, by thegeneralofmusic@yahoo.ca | Fight |
24th March 2009:
Wow, he managed to get out. But left Ron and Sirius back in there. Now what?
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{reviewid: 2081571, reviewer: 'thegeneralofmusic%40yahoo.ca'}
| Review #3, by thegeneralofmusic@yahoo.ca | Limbo |
24th March 2009:
So who is the other voice? Another element to this drama. Very good.
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{reviewid: 2081558, reviewer: 'thegeneralofmusic%40yahoo.ca'}
24th March 2009:
This is interesting. Why would they be sent into limbo? And who is that speaking to them? Very exciting.
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{reviewid: 2081557, reviewer: 'thegeneralofmusic%40yahoo.ca'}
| Review #5, by thegeneralofmusic@yahoo.ca | Plans |
24th March 2009:
They should tell Dumbledore now before it happens. This is not good.
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{reviewid: 2081555, reviewer: 'thegeneralofmusic%40yahoo.ca'}
| Review #6, by thegeneralofmusic@yahoo.ca | Danger! |
24th March 2009:
That was pretty exciting. But they made it through it together.
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{reviewid: 2081553, reviewer: 'thegeneralofmusic%40yahoo.ca'}
24th March 2009:
Well, the day with Draco went pretty good. They may not become friends but they can at least get along with each other.
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{reviewid: 2081552, reviewer: 'thegeneralofmusic%40yahoo.ca'}
| Review #8, by thegeneralofmusic@yahoo.ca | Changes |
24th March 2009:
Now for a little time to pass and see whether Hermione really wants to be with Ron or not. I wonder how you will work this out.
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{reviewid: 2081549, reviewer: 'thegeneralofmusic%40yahoo.ca'}
24th March 2009:
So Professor Riddle is Voldemort's niece. How interesting. I hope that she is telling the truth, and doen't betray them.
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{reviewid: 2081546, reviewer: 'thegeneralofmusic%40yahoo.ca'}
24th March 2009:
So ends the first day back at Hogwarts. I believe Aleu will fit in pretty well.
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{reviewid: 2081545, reviewer: 'thegeneralofmusic%40yahoo.ca'}
24th March 2009:
Nice to have things to remember your parents by. And family to share it with.
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{reviewid: 2081376, reviewer: 'thegeneralofmusic%40yahoo.ca'}
23rd March 2009:
That is interesting that the new Minister lowered the age for Aparation and doing magic. This could get very interesting.
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{reviewid: 2081368, reviewer: 'thegeneralofmusic%40yahoo.ca'}
23rd March 2009:
Now Harry is settled at his sister's place. Let's see what they will get into.
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{reviewid: 2081359, reviewer: 'thegeneralofmusic%40yahoo.ca'}
| Review #14, by thegeneralofmusic@yahoo.ca | Aleu |
23rd March 2009:
Very interesting. I had read another story where Harry had a twin sister also. This will be good.
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{reviewid: 2081356, reviewer: 'thegeneralofmusic%40yahoo.ca'}
23rd March 2009:
Off to a good start. Good story.
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{reviewid: 1601627, reviewer: 'Loopy'}
28th August 2007:
Good story! Too short for me! LOL!!! Keep up the good work...in other stories that is!
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{reviewid: 1441048, reviewer: 'sorcia'}
31st May 2007:
Woo! Great story! I love the plot! Maybe could have had more description though. Just a thought.
Oh and how do you pronounce ‘Aleu’? I've been pronouncing it like 'Alyoo' in my head. It's a really cool name!
Anyway what I thought of the story -
- GREAT! You use quite a few cliches but it works okay anyway.
- I like the dialogue it just flows really well. Which, I must add, is something I am VERY envious of.
- Writing style is brilliant! Although there were a couple of places where words could have been tweaked for more effect.
- Great plot! (as I already said)
- Maybe could have used more description. (also said this before :P)
All in all a brilliant story!!
Oh and by the way Professor Riddle’s pregnant? Does that mean that she and Snape….? *shudders at the thought*
Ok I’ll leave you now because I’ve talked for long enough!
*eagerly scuttles off to read sequel*
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{reviewid: 1406438, reviewer: 'rakawid'}
5th May 2007:
it's very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very god
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{reviewid: 1336893, reviewer: 'zeecutie'}
11th March 2007:
not to bad! :)
Author's Response: Thanks! By the way, this is my 100th review so thanks a lot! Here's to 100 more reviews! :)
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{reviewid: 1327673, reviewer: 'I_am_ever_so_Sirius'}
3rd March 2007:
YAY!! SIRIUS IS BACK!!! AND A TEACHER!!! WOOO HOOO!!!
1O/1O
~Sirius
Author's Response: Yep, Hogwarts will never be the same :)
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{reviewid: 1327667, reviewer: 'I_am_ever_so_Sirius'}
3rd March 2007:
W-oh-kay... 1O/1O
~Sirius
Author's Response: Thanks
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{reviewid: 1327653, reviewer: 'I_am_ever_so_Sirius'}
3rd March 2007:
Erm. Pads would have most certainly known about the prophecy. 1O/1O
~Sirius
Author's Response: Yeah, probably. But I thought it would be more interesting if he didn't.
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{reviewid: 1327648, reviewer: 'I_am_ever_so_Sirius'}
3rd March 2007:
Great, 1O/1O
~Sirius
Author's Response: Thanks
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{reviewid: 1327644, reviewer: 'I_am_ever_so_Sirius'}
3rd March 2007:
Great!! 1O/1O
Cheerz!!
~Sirius
Author's Response: Thanks
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{reviewid: 1327633, reviewer: 'I_am_ever_so_Sirius'}
3rd March 2007:
This is really really really quick and bloody fast-paced!! 1O/1O
Cheerz!!
~Sirius
Author's Response: Sorry if it's a bit too quick but I like it when it's fast-paced. It doesn't get boring :)
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