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Review #1, by charlottetrips Untitled So Far

14th July 2013:
It's kind of sad that this story wasn't continued. I like the premise of actually taking people in the middle of their school year from all these different places and fitting them into Hogwarts. Angora sounds like an interesting character so far with her having to move to all these different places and thinking Hogwarts will be easy in comparison to Beauxbatons.

I was a little thrown off with Sharmayne but I guess that's because it was written by a different author and there's only a few paragraphs dedicated to her. I like that you had her make her Australian school have a nickname as it made the whole thing less formal and had me, the reader, being more part of the story as opposed to apart from it.

This was a good start and I don't think you'll read this ever but if you do, know that it would've been nice to continue!

Char

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