Well this is great, some spelling mistakes, but hey anybody with a brain cell could have figured out what it was supposed to be. Really good story composure, plot line, and outcome. I really like this story because it shows what can happen when someone is so angust filled when it comes to one person. Other stories I have read on this subject have put it as a kind of nobody can go crazy when doing something like this sort of thing. So appreciate the honesty of this story, and the hidden message behind it. Did you mean to do this or is it just me looking a lot harder then i need to? Anyway i hope you had a lot of fun writing this story, because it gave me joy in reading such a grand peice of literature -Andias Report Review
wow compleat awesomeness, great story so far gotta go read the rest, and i'll leave you a nice big and long review at the very end of it. Report Review
wow! great story i truely love it. i even cried a few times. your a great writer keep it up! well off to read your other storys -tiffany michelle wilson Report Review
omfg i f-in love it -tiffany michelle wilson Report Review
I find that this is one of the few fix where harry is in the true seat of power in the relationship. CuteAuthor's Response: yeh, thanx Report Review
OO that was just dirty fun!Author's Response: lol, was it now . . . hehehe thanx for reviewing Report Review
Hott ending to this chapter I was feeling violated just reading it! HaHa, no but this is a great story :-)Author's Response: lol, thank you!! Report Review
Love your story!Author's Response: Thank You! I'm glad!! Report Review
Great slash.... Is this the last one???? if it is that sucks!Author's Response: thanks. This is in no way the last one, I haven't done any shifting hearts yet! Much more to come. thanks for reviewing!! Report Review
wow that was awesome!!! ^_^Author's Response: thanks, I'm soo glad you liked it! Report Review
wicked!!!! ****** ^_^ Author's Response: thanks! and thanx for reviewing!! Report Review
i'm glad to see that everything turned out ok. yay: voldie's dead! anyway,update soon. xxxAuthor's Response: yeh, stupid evil git was getting on my nerves, he just had 2 go. Nehu's thanks for reviewing, I'm busy fixing up a puter but I'll update asap!! Report Review
HEY THIS STORY IS AWESOME!! PLEASE POST AGAIN SOON!!!!!!Author's Response: hey, thanx, I'll try to soon! Report Review
*point blank speachless* okay, I NEED the next one!!!! ::sobs:: this is so good!!!!ack!Author's Response: wow, that's even better than your last review. Thank you heaps for the nice review, i'll try to update soon Report Review
ooh i can't believe this is happening!!great chapter.update soon please!!Author's Response: uh . . . thanx . . . really, ok then. Thanx for the review, I will try. Report Review
OMG please post again soon!!! i can't wait for what's going to happen next!Author's Response: ok, will really try to do, thanx 4 reviewing!! Report Review
OOHHH!!! I am mentioned all pretty and spelt right YAY!!! OK on with reviewing the story! It was Sooo good and i hope harry takes the B******d down and pettigrew along with it. i hate worm tail.Author's Response: oh good so i did get it right, yay go me! im so happy you like your chapter. Pettigrew hey, hadn't even thought of him *grins mischeviously* thanx for the review!! Report Review
It reminds me somewhat of a soft-core porno, but I like it for some reason. You usually don't see a Draco/Harry story written like that. I think it's a little in the fluff genre, but it is nicely written. Most people aren't comfortable visualising Harry and Draco snogging, but you know...once you get used to the idea, it's nothing surprising. Nice job though.Author's Response: soft core porno? how did i manage that? i've been unsure of what to write lately so yes it's been a bit fluffy, but it will get better once i get some inpspiration. Thanx for the nice comments though. Report Review
PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE I LOVE THIS STORY!!!!Author's Response: wow, thanx, nice review, i'll try to get the next one up soon. (read the note at the start of the next chapter ; ) ) Report Review
I enjoy reading this. I'll be waiting for the rest. It's really good.Author's Response: thank u, im glad you enjoy reading it, thanx 4 the review. Report Review
awesome, i never realised these stories could be so addictive. harry and draco? would never have thought of a couple like those two. can't wait for the rest of the story! hurry up and write it!Author's Response: lolz, d/h is one of the more popular i thinks, I told you they were addicitve! im trying but as you kno im very busy with skool and stuff. glad u like it tho. thanx 4 the reviews. Report Review
Ah! No! susupense....can't breathe!!!!!!!! so, i have a few questions. you keep wavering back andforth about htings. first, you said they wur talking to sirius in the fire, but then you said something about sirius' house being all that he had left of him. and also, you said the remaining student ( when harry and draco and i think hermione went to sit at the teach table), but then you said all these ppl crouded onto the hgwarts express. Just thought i'd point that out, but all together i like it a lot. I really should get some sleep. I have school work and then 2 hours of choir rehersal tomorrow.........*groan* alright, nighty night, don't let the bed bugs bite! (hA it rhymes!i'm so funny I feel the need to hit myself) Jul Author's Response: oh truly, thanx 4 pointing it out, im writing so many stories at once I cant member whats going on in which, i'll edit it them asap. Thanx 4 reviewing, glad you like it Report Review
great story.update soon.Author's Response: thanx, will try 2 update Report Review
I love this story!!! please keep going, i need to know what happens next!!! keep up the fantabulous work!!!! Author's Response: Thanx I'll try to update soon. Report Review
OHHH Shats gonna happen next. Cant wait 4 the next installment.Author's Response: Good to hear, Thanx 4 reading Report Review
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