Loved this story could you please do others like it with different couples from the Harry potter world

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Wow! It was great!! I loved every moment of it!:)

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This is great so far I just can't stop reading it! It's amazing well done :)

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Hi! I love your story! This is just the kind of James/Lilly fic I have been looking for for ages! I love your amazing idesa! Maybe Sirius could get a girl in the next couple chapters. I will tell all my friends about this story because we all love James and Lilly fictions. Please please write more! It's addictive. See you in the next chapter. Kitty Potter :)

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hey! i thought it was a gr8 story.. i liked the way peter was portrayed..its quite different from the other hpff. But you do have to lengthen your chapters..overall..good job! i njoyed it a lot :)

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It was awesome, I've never read a fic with Lily being a loner and no one knowing her, loved it!

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no matter how many times i read this story i always love it :) i've lost count about how many times i've read it :) I love the whole thing how you have Lily so innocent and naive and James so cocky :) this is truly one of my favourite J/L stories :)
[=Miss Ginny Potter=]

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great story
i acc loved it

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nice beginning :)
definitely enjoyed it.
can't wait to read more

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I enjoyed reading this! I always love a story I can have closure with... I hate having to read uncompleted stories.

Great job!

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AH OMG THAT WAS AMAZING!

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That's kinda sad about Peter, but I love it all the same. Great job.

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Wow this has been a fantastic story!!
thank you for writing it.. the scene where they make love is so sweet, nearly made me cry. :) though i suppose that was partly due to the sad beautiful music i was playing in the background.
10/10
cheers,

Tiny Dancer

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I just read the whole thing and I loved it. I especially liked how you brought in the Peter thing =) And James and Lily are of course just cuteness personified < 3

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is that the road not taken - by robert frost?

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Ahahahah your story is amazing!

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wow, this was an amazing story! i liked how there weren't many filler chapter, instead there was good action in every scene!! write more lily/james stories please!

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poor peter, but he did agree with her that the date would only be as friends, but he is still creepy. and her and james are sooo adorable! i can't wait to read the last chapter!

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wow, that sure was an intense chapter! hmm, it was really good. stupid sirius, don't any of them know how to knock? lol!

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she is an adult though. for wizards, they come of age when they're seventeen. this was a good cliffhanger, i wonder who's walking in...

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it would especially suck to be lily right at that moment! the poor, poor girl! they are sooo rude to her, especially james.

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awkward!! that would definitely be the worst position to be stuck in! i wonder how she is going to get out of that mess!

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colorado rocks! anyway, nice chapter! her and sirius are really funny together! you're very good at the characters' personalities, they seem like real people!

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nice chapter. this looks like a good story. so james doesn't like lily and they're in sixth year right?

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Finished? I can't believe it! It was going so good. I guess all good things come to an end or in these case beginning. Maybe you would think about writing a sequel, wouldn't you? That would be great, anyway good job!!

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