Reading Reviews for Secrets
4 Reviews Found

Review #1, by Astrea Epilogue

16th July 2005:
I read your story because you only had like 3 or 4 reviews. And also because your style caught my eye. Its a good story but honestly I was kinda disappointed in the end. The second to last chapter you set it up so well for some realy action, which I understand isnt exactly the genre however, it could have been such a good plot but then you just finish the story. Kinda like plop! its over... this story has some real potential. How does Kyra become involved? Does she find out about the Order? If so, how? Does she help Justin? Do the Death Eaters escape? Is he truly safe? What about her last year? How do people react to finding out she and a professor are dating? See, there are so many unaswered questions... it kinda left me hanging. The ending was packaged up too neatly, like boom its over... but theres so many things you could develop. So that's what I thought... good story though.

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Review #2, by Astrea Ravenclaw vs. Ravenclaw

11th July 2005:
It's a shame that your story isn't getting many reviews. Its pretty good. Its hard to take a story like this with other characters from a house that we know next to nothing of and make it work. But yours works. And I like the MAP program idea. I don't think I've ever read a fanfic that involves something like this. It also sounds like you have thought a lot about your characters. Keep up the good work!

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Review #3, by Kimberly Valentine Kisses

20th April 2005:
great chapter.

Author's Response: Thanks! This one was fun to write. Can you tell I'm a hopeless romantic?

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Review #4, by Fredslover Professor Bale

20th March 2005:
Omg, I couldn't stop reading this!! Could I make a banner for you? Please go here:

Author's Response: Thanks! The rest of the story has now been posted, if you'd like to continue reading. And I would love a banner, if you're still interested. :)

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