{reviewid: 2273248, reviewer: 'Jessie%20C.'}
24th December 2009:
Aw. what a cute story... great job on revision... not many people will go back and revise a one shot :)
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{reviewid: 1347347, reviewer: 'elizabeth'}
19th March 2007:
haha cute! i love one-shot fluffy stuff. there're so much fun to read.
Author's Response: Thanks :)
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{reviewid: 1161186, reviewer: 'anne%20potter'}
11th October 2006:
that was so sweet and cute and romantic just an awsome fic
Author's Response: thanks
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{reviewid: 1111379, reviewer: 'harrypottersangel'}
20th August 2006:
I love it! I can see them doing that and it's so sweet!
love ~K
ps - In my favorites with a 10
Author's Response: thanks :)
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{reviewid: 1094333, reviewer: 'wired2damoon'}
6th August 2006:
Ha ha this was very amusing! i like the "wood" joke, so true to what a guy thinks like!! very well written and just the right amount of discriptions! well done its goin in my faves, and u as an author! 10! luv wired2damoon xxx:o)
Author's Response: thanks :) glad you liked it.
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{reviewid: 1052477, reviewer: 'Sudha53'}
7th July 2006:
hahaha i loved it! a favorite!!
Author's Response: Thanks again
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{reviewid: 994464, reviewer: 'Amanda'}
21st May 2006:
that was adorible:)
Author's Response: thanks :)
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{reviewid: 992053, reviewer: 'LovelyMioneWeasley'}
18th May 2006:
wow, awesome job! a few grammitical errors here and there, but AWESOME!
LMW
Author's Response: Aww thanks :)
I should go back and look over the grammar... I wrote it late at night and submitted it with out any proofreading
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{reviewid: 986378, reviewer: 'Brenda16'}
14th May 2006:
Oh, that was adorable, i loved that, that was so cute, absolutely adorable!!! couldn't have been better, i especially liked the part of his 'wood' lol, i was cracking up! so funny and so well done!!! Lovely job, you should be proud, i am so glad i came across this, it was definitely worth my time! -Brenda
Author's Response: Thanks :) I havn't received a review for that one in forever. I forget it exists sometimes.
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{reviewid: 881048, reviewer: 'hpgirl_91'}
30th January 2006:
Really cute, I loved it! Great job!
Author's Response: Thanks :)
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{reviewid: 870221, reviewer: 'amanda%20weasley'}
22nd January 2006:
what a cute story ;)
Author's Response: thank you :)
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{reviewid: 775611, reviewer: 'unknown_force'}
19th November 2005:
the story isn't as bad as you put it in the summary, but I thought the transition of Ron being self conscious in the beginning to being smooth in the end was a little weird, besides that a nice fluffy one-shot
Author's Response: thanks :) I'm glad you didn't think it was as bad as I did. I did revise it some from it's original 2 in the morning state
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{reviewid: 689681, reviewer: '06'}
10th September 2005:
nice one
Author's Response: thank you
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{reviewid: 688823, reviewer: 'fairgirl'}
9th September 2005:
ohhhhhhhhh that was really good!! cute and fluffy
Author's Response: thank you
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{reviewid: 670706, reviewer: 'gabzi27'}
28th August 2005:
cute 9/10
Author's Response: thanks :)
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{reviewid: 480833, reviewer: 'pretty%20in%20pink'}
29th April 2005:
hee hee! broomstick innuendoes - they come so easy in harry potter fics, dont they?
Author's Response: yeah i know ;)
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{reviewid: 458263, reviewer: 'Walnut'}
12th April 2005:
Besides the whole French-kissing and euphemism thing, that was a really sweet story.
Author's Response: Thank you... The silly euphemism kinda started accidentally, but once I realized what I was saying I embelished on it (I was really tired when I wrote this)
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{reviewid: 450240, reviewer: 'the5thmarauder'}
7th April 2005:
I loved it, it was really sweet but endearing at the same time go you! write more one shots of Hermione and Ron, better yet extend this one!
Author's Response: I'm glad you liked it. Maybe I could extend it... make it the cheesy chapter where they fall in love towards the end of the story
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{reviewid: 431716, reviewer: 'DarkMarkGirl'}
27th March 2005:
JW where is everybody getting Mione from?
Author's Response: I'm not really sure, I'll admit, I saw everyone else use it and coppied it for lack of a better nickname...
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{reviewid: 424321, reviewer: 'EighthWeasley'}
22nd March 2005:
Hey, good story, very cute and I'm glad I took a study break to enjoy it. A few grammatical errors which are slightly distracting, would be happy to edit it for you if you like. Good story!!!!
Author's Response: I'm glad you thought it was ok. I know the typos are terrible, I wrote it in the middle of the night when I couldn't sleep and I thought it was the greatest thing since sliced bread. Now I reread it and I'm almost ashamed. I tried to fix it up, but I realized the story was a little weak too if you have any suggestions I'd love to hear them
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