lol low quality

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I love it. But the romantic scenes between Lucius and Cissy can be more. All story was a bit boring, but end was fantastic.

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Sorry it seemes I have reviewed twice. :)

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This is a really good story. I love the beautiful friendship relationships and how Lucius and Narcissa blended so perfectly together. Also I must say the scene with Rodulphus and Bellatrix getting together was exquisite. The way they could say things to each other without words was really quite romantic. This is the first EVER L/N i have ever read and I might add i think it just might be one of the best. Continue with the Stupendous writing. Sincerely Lavera

Author's Response: OOOOOOH! Thanks! Unfortunately, I won't be able to write more until March.

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This is a really good story. I love the beautiful friendship relationships and how Lucius and Narcissa blended so perfectly together. Also I must say the scene with Rodulphus and Bellatrix getting together was exquisite. The way they could say things to each other without words was really quite romantic. This is the first EVER L/N i have ever read and I might add i think it just might be one of the best. Continue with the Stupendous writing. Sincerely Lavera

Author's Response: see response to the other!

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UPDATE! i love this story! please update soon! ergh! why a cliffy! well plese update!

Author's Response: I will... But the writer's block.... besides, I still got vacations homework to do... Blame it on my teachers! It'll still take a while, sorry.

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interesting plot I suppose, but a few suggestions: In my opinion, the jeer at Davasils' sexuality is a bit too juvenile for the adults that narcissa, carol and rodolphus are supposed to be. I also think that you made the children a little too adult in the flashback, they seem like miniature versions of their current selves, perhaps more mature then they are now in some parts.

Author's Response: Ohhh... Really? Well, I kinda inspired them in my classmates and, well, myself. Okay, thanks for the comments. I will improve!

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update!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!lol i need to know what happens next.

Author's Response: I will... when the archive opens!

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Aaaaaaaaaah! yay! lol.

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Yay Lucius is in this chapter!

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yes it was short and well nothing much happened but oh well

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awe that was so awesome! you know i never really read any Lucius/ Narcissa fan fictions cause i am usually in the Draco/ Hermione sections so yeah this is my first time reding a l/n fiction. lol.

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aye plllzz keep on goin plz!! i lubed dem lyk there tha bomb!! plllzz keep on going!! thats all i ask PLEASE KEEP ON GOING!!u stopped at 8 pllzzz lyk a couple more pplllzzz nd could u hit me up on mckennalc@yahoo.com soo u kan update me if u rote summore?! plz plz?! ahhh well hey guerl i really like them and good luck ! k bi peace out mckenna <3333

Author's Response: Wohooo! Keep the Internetish down, it's time for English! Lol, ch 9 is written, but the submissions are closed and I have no access to my stories here....

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Bellatrix has black hair. She's not a brunette.

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I think Bellatrix is older than Narcissa, and that wasn't a long flashback at all.

Author's Response: Really? Well, it was long to write. And in my imagination, Bella is younger... JK doesn't tell us that.

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Miss is supposed to be capitalized and almost nobody reading this cares about your friends. I know I don't.

Author's Response: Look, pal, I understood the other 2 reviews as rude CC, but well, so what if you don't care about my friends? It didn't kill you to read the a/n. If I'm being rude, sorry, but you're being a PAIN.

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awesome!!!!!

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keep goinn!! its funny and its wicked cute!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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OMG! UPDATE! i loved it! it was really good! please update soon! 10 out of 10 , loved it!

Author's Response: Thanks! I will update. I'm just having some major writer's block and a lack of reviews.

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update soon! i cant wait to see what happens next! its good i like to please up date! okay! 10/10

Author's Response: Thanks! I will update. I'm just having some major writer's block and a lack of reviews.

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UPDATE!!!! SOON!! PLEASE! I MUST KNOW WHAT HAPPENS NEXT!! poor Narcissa , i hope lucius come through , but seriously UPDATE SOON!!!!!! rating way past 10! i love it!

Author's Response: Thanks! I will update. I'm just having some major writer's block and a lack of reviews.

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lovely and sweet

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i wold have been mad but i would have know she did it out of the goodness ofher hart grate, wnoderful, Excellent lost

Author's Response: I don't quite understand what you said, but yay, it was a compliment! Thanks!

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sorry wrote the reviw for the wrong capter soppse to be for 1 try better next time bye bye

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sad beging to a story but i think it has Potential love it got to go brothers yelling for me to get of men!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! byebye

Author's Response: Okay, still don't get it, but thanks!

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