cool plot.love it already. Please update soon. Report Review
MORE!!!!!!!!!!! Report Review
This is a pretty good story. Keep at it. Report Review
Great story Shi, really great... I hope you continue providing us with some of your great writing.
PhilipL Report Review
cool! write more! Report Review
Very Cool Shion. What a creative beginning and a creative story. I can\'t wait to read more!
:) Rei Report Review
Kudos! Extra points on the describing of Dumbledore! hehe! I really like this story, keep writing...
PS: Please read and review \"New Faces, Old Friends\"... New chap is up!!! Report Review
Great story idea! It\'s a really cool story! Write more plz! Report Review
good beginning... Of course Christian is hot! lol, anyway I may beg to differ with the other two... (don\'t kill me!) Anyway, what was the message??? Is it going to be of importance to the story? And I\'m sure all of us have seen the HP movies, but maybe try describing him as a man beyond age with a pointed nose and mischievious twinkle in his saphire eyes... something like that. Other than that is was really good, I want to see what it is like, keep updating!
PS: if anyone feels kind enough to read \"New Faces, Old Friends\" I updated, maybe for the last time if I don\'t get anymore reviews! Report Review
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