i loved it. It was very well written

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I really enjoyed this fic, and i cant believe this is your first time writing h/hr! This was actually one of the better ones iv read. You should really think about doing more h/hr, im sure i wont be your only fan if you do :)

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Wow this is what... the... second H/Hr story I've read? I liked it a lot! Just the whole time I was pretend that Hermione was Ginny :D

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Very well written. Quite enjoyable.

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amazing

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i read penny linsemayers essay 2!!!! i sort of wanted harry and hermione and after i read that i thought it even more! LUV your strory too!!!!

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Awesome story. It certainly doesn't seem like your first attempt at a H/Hr story. I would love to read this essay you are talking about. If you could send me the link, I'd appreciate it. hp_ff_02@yahoo.com

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Although I'm new to reading harry potter fan fiction, I enjoyed the story! I was really surprised at how blunt you were with the insults earlier in the story between Malfoy and Potter. Just a thought, loved the story! Write more!

Author's Response: Thanks, Alvin. I'm glad you landed in the fandom close enough to find one of my stories. The bluntness was intentional, I'm afraid. I had intended to have another Malfoy scene where it was explained, but, alas, it didn't happen. Thanks for the kind review! :D

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I like it good job

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i liked it a lot very cute and fluffy!

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That was really well written. I don't even like Harry/Hermione pairings because in my mind, RON AND HERMIONE belong together. But anyways, this was sooooo good! I LOVED IT!!

Author's Response: I completely agree on ship preference! I prefer Harry and Ginny myself, but as a writer, felt the need to explore a little bit of the 'other' way of thinking. Thanks for reading!

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