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Review #1, by bubblez Her House

26th December 2011:
Who is Mark sopposed to be
Tht is NOT luna's fathers name

Author's Response: Please keep in mind that at the time this was written (Feb. 2005) we didn't have much information regarding Luna's father. If his name had appeared in any of the first five, I would have given him the correct name.

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Review #2, by sagesolon Her House

3rd June 2006:
Not bad. I'm usually not a Luna/Harry shipper. But it's a sweet little fic. I think your writing style is nicely put together. You balance dialogue with descriptions and noverbal action nicely. I'd be interested to see what you do with an actual story. If you need some ideas please write me at

I have tons of ideas but with me writing on three different fics as well as trying to formulate the next installment of my Huntress series I just don't have time and I'd love to see these ideas on the site. I like your writing style or else I would not be offering you this. So, if you're interested please let me know.


Author's Response: Thank you ever so much for the review and compliments. I might be able to write for you.

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Review #3, by Dancing Queen Her House

10th April 2006:
Hey! this was awesome! Not many people write H/L fics. You should write more either to this or a completely different story.

Author's Response: Thank you! I went for something different.
~ moondancer

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Review #4, by wishesanddreams Her House

16th August 2005:
you shouldn't have use SMG as Luna...i was wierd

Author's Response: Okay. I'll make a new banner. Thanks for the review!

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Review #5, by Melissa Black Her House

21st March 2005:
Good fic, but I'm not sure using Sarah Michelle Gellar for Luna on the banner was such a good idea...sorry, I'm a big SMG fan, and it just doesn't seem right :D Anyways, it's a great fic, but I have to go with Healer on this one, I NEED some answers!

Author's Response: I thought about doing a prequel fic using Josh Groban's For Always to explain things. Who do you suggest using? I seriously couldn't think of anyone when I made the banner.

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Review #6, by Healer_25 Her House

4th March 2005:
Interesting, are you going to continue with it? It's just that the story ends a bit oddly, and I don't understand why he was given the book or what was inside it, or why little hangleton made so much sense to give the book then. I just wish the answers were there.

Author's Response: Thank you for reveiwing. I'll write something to explain it, whether it is an author's note or a continuation of the story, I don't know.

Author's Response: I might even do both.

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