Hiya! This is a really great story. Could you do me a favor? I was wondering if you could review my stories. That would be great, thanx. Keep writing more cuz im very interested in it.

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I\'m back.... One word: Disappointing. Why is Draco\'s POV so short?? You need to flesh out his character!!! It is so two dimensional at the moment.... \"It makes her hair every unconventional, from a dying point of view (no pun intended).\" - Did you mean to say that it makes her hair very unconventional? Because it doesn\'t make sense if you say every. MaxPOWER. I\'m not being a picky pete on purpose...I\'m trying to give you an honest opinion =)

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Wonderful, I love the character and that you made her be in Slytherin, Carne is the perfect addition to the Harry Potter characters. I want to read more!!

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This is a really good story. Keep postinf. I\'ll be waiting with interest...

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Hey Jennifer! the \'AKA\' thing is mine...... LOL I have checked out your story... it\'s cool. Anyway, I know there are quite a lot of explanations to be done and they will be done trust me, cate aka carne

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Hey Carne, u cant get rid of me :) i like this chapter, just a sugesstion but when Snape takes 50 pts from Carne what if he says Gryffindor by acident before he realises shes a slytherin? okay grat chapter, hope theirs more soon Amber

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Whoo hoo!!! Snape is humiliated.....heheh. Anyways, good story. Keep writing and thank you for reviewing my story!

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(This is based on the first chapter!) I like it! It\'s funny! But Harry, Ron and Hermione wouldnt do that... And Harry wouldn\'t ask someone to be his friend... But otherwise, it was good!

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I still like it!! :D But I got REALLY confused on the points thing.. I mean, REALLY REALLY confused! Snape took 50 points away from Slytherin.. Then Malfoy shouts Carne\'s a Slytherin.. Then Snape thinks that he isn\'t going to take points away???? And earlier if he didnt notice she was in Slytherin, then wouldnt he of taken the points away from Gryffindor? And if the point were form Gryffindor.. then someone form Gryffindor should of said she was a Slytherin? Uhh.. SORRY! I needed to get that all out!! :D So, yeah! I really do like this story! It\'s cool!

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ok this is a really cool story, it\'s edgey, even if you are making fun of my fave charactor...anyways i really don\'t see draco running out of the great hall but i see/saw where it lead up to so i guess that can be forgiven. Don\'t worry about lack of reviews, you should continue writing no matter what. I suggest yo advertise your story on the main page or in reviews you write. Kinda like the one i am now. lolz. anyways if you get the chance could you check out my fic every snake has a silver lining by clicking my name or seaching for it? thanks. Hope to see more of you and read more of this story. Jennifer Royal aka Sarah Young

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Hey this aint bad at all. The development of Carne\'s character is quite good but you have made Draco a bit flimsy. You need background to why he fell in love with her. I mean, he just met her and already he\'s in love?? What a softie lol But keep writing because this has a good basis to be a great fic. Thanks for reviewing by the way. Check out my other fics too! Please!

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hey! that was a really good beginning, I can\'t wait to see what happens next! It\'s good that Hermione and Carne became closer, Hermione needs some friends other than those two airhead boys lol jk. thanks for the review on my story, I really appreciate it! :) ~Amy Macio~

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GUYS YOU ARE ALL SOOOOO SWEET.... thanx for reviewing... Max Power, I was going to delve into DM\'s feelings as well... but I\'m kinda stuck on that part! It is coming slowly, so gimme time and that part of this story will appear. OK gtg THE AUTHOR PS: YOU HAVE TO HAVE TO HAVE TO TELL ME IF THIS IS BECOMING A MARY SUE! OK GUYS?

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i\'m so good i\'m so good.... lalalalalalala.... LOL... I feel very supported... and I will support all the good ff writers here too... (which just happens to be all of you) BTW I am writing another ff. so watch out

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I am encouraging you to please keep on writting.dont ever stop! Ps:R/R my stories

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Interesting ideas you have here Carne. I like the play of that you have between your two characters. :) Keep up the good work! I want to know what will happen next? Isobel

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great story I love it(even though you flamed my story brooke)lets forget about flaming.can you please read my other stories.I have written 6 so far theyre longer too.I actually took time to plan them.please read them

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AWESOME STORY!!!!!!!!!! keep writing! please????????????????? Anyway, good job! btw: thanx for the review! I didnt think MEone would like my story, as I have never writen angst before. :)

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The story you\'re writing I\'d say is great. You\'ve put together a character that was what I\'ve always wished for in Hogworts.

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Hey Carne, i promised 2 review + here i am... ok, its a good storyline + i love Draco bashing, maybe if you make your chapters a little longer + use a bit more detail, maybe its just the speed i read at (actuslly its probably that, i didnt even know Harry had green eyes till i started reading fanfiction) but i didnt see a description of Carne, if u need a beta im happy 2 help, not saying u need 1 coz i didnt find many mistakes. ok keeep writing, ur good at this Amber

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HEY!!!!! I really really reallly really like this! It is a very very good story.. I wonder what would happen next... as it seems, Carne is all you said she is: aloof, and I like I like I like the way she\'s got a cutting tongue. Keeep the good work up!

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