Great start and yes the ending is a little confusing.. Report Review
who is amelia and u did ramble a lot half the time i couldnteven understand things if she was lonly taking that many classes she should be held back cum on Report Review
lovely. Report Review
thanks for the explaintion! it made this story make more senseAuthor's Response: I'm glad you get it : ) And thanks for reviewing...you gave me the idea for a new story...!!! Report Review
cool. i loved it. Report Review
interstingg Report Review
i loved it! But how do you say Amelie?Author's Response: You say her name like this:
ah-mah-lee....thanks for the review : ) Report Review
okay, i have sevral questions/sugestions
1. The two classes thing is confusing. Why is she only taking two classes? you have to take most until 6 year.
2. who exactally is Amelia, you need to describe her. How old is she? What does she look like?
Please don't think negitively about this, i really enjoyed the story, i just need to know more. Gook luck
Author's Response: I guess it would be confusing...and I'm sorry for that.
1) well, Amelia was a special case, she's different, I guess that I didn't go into enough detail...even though I thought that I had.
2) I was thinking about making a type of prequel, because I made such a complex character...at least I think so...and I just jumped into this story like everyone knew her already.
Just think of her as fun, carefree, and slightly jealous...of everyone...i'll try and write up a beggining story about her very shortly.
Thanks for your reviews : ) Report Review
Great story, you have lots of talent and potential as an author! Carry on writing! Plz r/r my fic, thanx!Author's Response: Thanks a bunch, and I most definately will r/r yours.
UPDATE A>S>A>P> I WANNA KNOW WHAT HAPPENS!!!!Author's Response: ok ok ok, gimme a minute, or two or three, i was in florida on vaca, its comin out soon. Report Review
I like it. GGood job. Keep writingAuthor's Response: Why thank you ma dear. Report Review
This is a really good start to your story, and I'm surprised that not a lot of people have reviewe yet! Come on people, this is a great story! Stop being lazy and review!Author's Response: lol, thanks for your support, I appreciate it! Report Review
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