I like it! Its slightly AU but its the perfect alternate childhood for Tom Riddle. Please continue it!

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omg it was good. you eeeed to write more pleeez!

Author's Response: Thank you! :D I appreciate your review. I am going to try to update as soon as I can! :)

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Hey Lionpaws... I've seen you in the forums and thought I would check one of your stories... It's ok with a short introduction! I really like this approach to the HP univers... I've never read a story about "Voldermort.. the prequal".. or... you know what I mean! well I will be looking for updates!

Author's Response: Aw thanks! Yea, I love the forums, lol. I'm glad you like my story! It means a lot to me that you reviewed ^ . ^ Hopefully, I'll be able to update soon! Much love, *~Lionpaws~*

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Lionpaws, this was a good introduction showing Tom's family life. There are canon details (like Tom's mother leaving Tom's father after he rejected her, possibly abandoning her, and she ended up giving birth to Tom and dying afterwards leaving her son to grow up in a Muggle orphanage) that you have not considered when you wrote this fic but no matter. This is your fic! I can't wait to see where you take this story. Update quickly :)

Author's Response: Yes, I know. I realised that mistake after I'd written it *sigh* Maybe I should just make it an AU fic instead? Then everything would make more sense, lol. Thank you for taking the time to read it! And I'm glad you'd like to read more =)

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Good beginning, very good, but I was kind of turned off by the fact that Tom lived with his dad. In Canon, he doesn't, he lives in a muggle orphanage, just in case you didn't know...

Author's Response: Yeah, I realised that too after I'd written it... I probab;y change that to make sense or just make it an AU fic afterall. Hopefully I will be able to edit it soon =) Thanks for the constructive critisism! =D

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You have three stories, but only one chapter each (if I read it right). You'll have outstanding stories if you continue your writing! I'll be looking forward to reading more of each of your stories!

Author's Response: Thanx so much! It means a lot to me. I will definately post some new chapters this weekend! :) *~Lionpaws~* 3/4/05

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hmm...interesting. I never really thought about Tom's childhood. Very interesting. Update soon ok? :o)

Author's Response: I'm glad you seem interested! I will update as soon as I can :) Thank you for reviewing! *~Lionpaws~*

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This is good. Add more to it.

Author's Response: Wow! Thanx so much! I should be adding soon :) *~Lionpaws~*

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