{reviewid: 2345750, reviewer: 'Lallen'}
11th May 2010:
OH MY GOD! LOVE THIS CHAPTER! please please don't abandon this story i will have a mental breakdown!!!
Well done so far on AWESOME story :)
10/10
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{reviewid: 2327096, reviewer: 'IwRiTe4mE'}
6th April 2010:
omg!!! no way no way no way! ! lily pregnant, sirius out of it, and jace being a bitch like always (no offense i just dont like her, shes kinda a major bitch/slut :( i feel so bad for saying that) anyway i love this story please update sooon! !
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{reviewid: 2290056, reviewer: 'chapstick'}
25th January 2010:
BAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA at Remus' freak out.
OMG at Lily's pregnantness. Is it Harry? Is she preggo with Harry? :D
And WHY DID JACE BREAK UP WITH SIRIUS!!! Did I miss something?!
Update soo.oo.oo.oo.oo.oo.oo.oo.oo.oo.oo.oon!
-Chanelle
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{reviewid: 2290052, reviewer: 'chapstick'}
25th January 2010:
Well, that's weird. That my comment about Remus' werewolf-ism last chapter and even the dun dun dun thing both appear here. I must be psychic on some level :D
Jed creeps me out a little.
-Chanelle
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{reviewid: 2290046, reviewer: 'chapstick'}
25th January 2010:
A more dark chapter than usual. And I was just reminded of Remus' werewolf-ism - is that going to be an issue soon? I don't believe the girls know yet. Dun-dun-dun!
-Chanelle
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{reviewid: 2290044, reviewer: 'chapstick'}
25th January 2010:
Ooooh, exciting. Good way of introducing the Order.
Ha-ha at Sirius' thoughts about Diggory!
-Chanelle
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{reviewid: 2290040, reviewer: 'chapstick'}
25th January 2010:
Hahahahahahahahahaha, Aubrie drunk and dancing on tables and being ridiculous. Love it!
-Chanelle
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{reviewid: 2290033, reviewer: 'chapstick'}
25th January 2010:
Likin' that Jace tried to get over to Rowan's to cheat properly. It's very in-character of her to be so irrational in such a moment. And I love it when she's angry, it's hilarious. Good stuff :D
-Chanelle
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{reviewid: 2290030, reviewer: 'chapstick'}
25th January 2010:
Aw, poor Sirius and Jace. Compliments on the relationship speed bump actually making sense and being worth reading. Sometimes an author just feels the need to screw things up so the lovers have a quarrel over nothing substantial. This situation is actually going to take some working out to calm down again.
Onward :)
-Chanelle
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{reviewid: 2290029, reviewer: 'chapstick'}
25th January 2010:
Before chapter was read:
My apologies, I got kicked off the computer yesterday. But I resume reading this chapter right now.
After chapter was read:
Hahahahaa, I love that rant on Jace's behalf from Wedding Crashers. It fits Jace perfectly, good call there :D
...And WHAT THE FRUIT?! Jace can not have cheated on Sirius again, its not possible, no no no!
Got a bit confused in that bit where Remus came into the room to tell Sirius about the letter though. I wasn't sure which perspective you were writing from cos it said ~Sirius~ at the top but then when Remus talked it said 'I' and yeah. Just confused me through that bit. Great chapter otherwise!
-Chanelle
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{reviewid: 2289568, reviewer: 'chapstick'}
24th January 2010:
"I hope the big bad parents aren’t eating you alive right now, but I hope James is, if you know what I mean."
HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!
-Chanelle
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{reviewid: 2289561, reviewer: 'chapstick'}
24th January 2010:
Awww, adorable. I like that you don't dwell on things that are so obviously about to happen - like Remus and Aubrie's little action just then. I'm really really looking forward to the boys finding out about the girls messing with their heads!
-Chanelle
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{reviewid: 2289558, reviewer: 'chapstick'}
24th January 2010:
Ha, hilarious! I wasn't expecting that at all (what the girls did at the slumber party). Greeaat idea! Still super-enjoying this story!
-Chanelle
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{reviewid: 2289550, reviewer: 'chapstick'}
24th January 2010:
Hahahahahahahahahaha, that's a great idea! I'm loving this story. Thanks a million and a half for writing this :D
-Chanelle
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{reviewid: 2289546, reviewer: 'chapstick'}
24th January 2010:
I really like this new format, with the different perspectives to the story. This is an excellent way of beginning a sequel :D I look forward to reading the rest!!
-Chanelle
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{reviewid: 2007848, reviewer: 'Marley_Potter'}
13th December 2008:
ROFL!! You horrible horrible person you made Lily pregnant!!!
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{reviewid: 2007745, reviewer: 'Babette%20Potter'}
12th December 2008:
YOU HAVE GOT TO FINISH THIS!
I loved this story.
It was really great!
I am very impatient to read more.
DID JACE BREAK UP WITH SIRIUS?
IF SHE DID I WILL HUNT HER DOWN.
Please write more.
Babette Potter
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{reviewid: 1996401, reviewer: 't.dott'}
27th November 2008:
i just want to tell you i really love your writing. you can deff hear your own style coming through. im TOTALLY bumed that you ended it so AHH! hahah and you prob dont even check this but. Awesome story.i wont give up on checking for updates!! ;)
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{reviewid: 1969901, reviewer: '%3D%5D'}
22nd October 2008:
great u have to continue!!!
i want to know what happens next!
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{reviewid: 1881260, reviewer: 'Gryf_Queen'}
30th March 2008:
AH! Lily's Pregnant!! Awesome chapter but sad since Jace broke up with Sirius. I hope they will get back together. Update soon!!
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{reviewid: 1621561, reviewer: 'Kimberly'}
9th September 2007:
awsome
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{reviewid: 1621558, reviewer: 'Kimberly'}
9th September 2007:
good chapter
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{reviewid: 1621552, reviewer: 'Kimberly'}
9th September 2007:
wow
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{reviewid: 1535170, reviewer: 'into_the_unknown'}
26th July 2007:
im confused didnt jace already know that he loved her considering he told her when they got back together
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{reviewid: 1433705, reviewer: 'Owlett'}
26th May 2007:
WHAT?! thats the end?! what! nooo it cant end there thats just cruel! argh no. WRITE MORE PLEASE! pease with sugar on?
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