{reviewid: 2249116, reviewer: 'GinervaPotter002'}
4th November 2009:
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wow. tense. I'm inspired. but none of your tutorials are really er, tutorials. You should make them like writing books and not just examaples. just a suggestion. thank you!
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{reviewid: 2246150, reviewer: 'leapoffaith24'}
30th October 2009:
this is so helpful. :)
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{reviewid: 1756689, reviewer: 'its%20Joana'}
17th December 2007:
i love this tutorial. its gonna help me further on :]
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{reviewid: 1569300, reviewer: 'Anox'}
12th August 2007:
Did you write this? It was great! I've never really read a Pansy/Draco before. It was really good:D
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{reviewid: 1288734, reviewer: 'Anony_Mouse'}
1st February 2007:
Very helpful. I was trying to figure out if my story would be good left as a 15+ and seeing as Draco tried to get farther, I think it will be. Mine's not as bad, anyway.
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{reviewid: 1235743, reviewer: 'althia4693'}
21st December 2006:
Can I mention the word bra?
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{reviewid: 1153378, reviewer: 'CrabPerson'}
3rd October 2006:
So did they have sex? I couldn't tell.
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{reviewid: 1129081, reviewer: 'Heiress_of_Slytherin'}
5th September 2006:
Thanks for the help!
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{reviewid: 1112159, reviewer: 'tjwhermione'}
21st August 2006:
Great. This, too, will help me a lot.
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{reviewid: 1069105, reviewer: 'bgii_2000'}
19th July 2006:
Draco plays baseball?
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{reviewid: 964778, reviewer: 'HP_rules'}
20th April 2006:
this was very interesting...i just came across it and i thought it would be good but dont get me wrong it was really good..but draco and pansy? lol...anyways yeah it helps alot ^^
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{reviewid: 910743, reviewer: 'Yuu'}
21st February 2006:
Okay, this was definitely helpful! Thanks!
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{reviewid: 835299, reviewer: 'firefawn'}
31st December 2005:
Another huge thanks should go out to the staff for this one as well. I honestly had been under the impression before hand that a 15+ would actually allow more than this example revealed, so I am very glad to have been able to read what the staff would find acceptable. And great work with going from the present to the past as well. Fabulous work!
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{reviewid: 491535, reviewer: 'HuffnPuffergrl2009'}
7th May 2005:
i love this sory i wisjh u would rite more its really really good
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{reviewid: 405644, reviewer: 'Baillie'}
9th March 2005:
not enough action
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{reviewid: 382326, reviewer: 'Gandelf%20%20The%20White'}
19th February 2005:
Wow! that would have been a really good start to a story. I know it was only saupposed to be a tutorial but i really think you should consider turning it into a real story. I'd certainly be willing to read
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{reviewid: 382284, reviewer: 'Healer_25'}
19th February 2005:
Ah, so no actual action, just suggestion, that makes sense, otherwise it'd have to be rated R, thanks for the heads up!
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