I really love this story. Please update it soon! :) Report Review
Plz UPDATE...It has been agesss11 Report Review
this is the most amazing fanfiction ever i love sirius SO cute =) and Lupin Report Review
This story is a great addition to the past of lily Evans. It's hilarious and it's great when an accomplished author can finish it. This piece is one of the best pieces I've read. I want to know what happens between lily, James, and Remus. I love the way you make a friendship between Sirius and lily. Report Review
I love this story, please finish it. And write more stories like this one please. I love it. Report Review
love love love this story!!! i need more! what happens with lily and remus, and what happens with james and remus! i need u your creativeness to tell me more! i know what supposed to happen but you say it best. please un-abandon!!! Report Review
remus and lily!!! i think that would be adorable. but if i know remus i can guess that he would never go for it. it would hurt james to no end knowing that the girl he loves is with one of his best friends. really good chapter! i'm excited to see what is gonna happen with james and "lily" and peter too, of course. you're a really great writer and i am very into this story. looking forward to more! Report Review
i really like this chapter! siruis puts on such a good front and you almost forget about the horrible family life the poor boy has at home. regulus does eventually get his act together, which is definitely a good thing. sirius is totally awesome and i love the lily side to him, what with his vanilla lip gloss and what not. the straightener of evil had me cracking up by the way.
ive really enjoyed this story and find it really funny! youre a great writer and now i got to go read on!
p.s. i totally got that it was regulus, no worries :) Report Review
this story looks as though its gonna be really good! i love siruis and to see him acting like lily, little miss perfect, is gonna be very interesting. im excited to keep reading. keep it up! Report Review
I know it says it's abandoned but please un-abandon!! I want to know what happens XD Report Review
Oh, poor Remus...
I think Lily was right in saying she was being a bit bi-polar, ay?
I think she needs space... or a chill pill... hahahaha
I have really enjoyed this story and I think its getting close to the end, please continue! Report Review
That poem at the beginning was so well done!
I actually checked on Google to see if it was out of some published parody or commentary on harry potter.
The rhyme was so natural and fitting, I really enjoyed it!
Hahaha and Lily's such the seductress ;) love it! Report Review
Great job I just read your story and it is so good. I love it now with Lily and James but my favorite part was when Lily switched with Sirius. Keep up with the amazing writing style because I find it easy and enjoyable to read. :) Report Review
Okay, the first half of the story was hilarious. Now its so emotional. . . I think that Remus and Lily should date a while and then when they break up James can step in. . yeah crystal perfect. Feel free to use your own plot twists. . . Report Review
LOVE THIS! To this day the most creative L/J ever. Any chance of unabandoning (that's not a word, is it?) any of your amazing works?Author's Response: Why thank you so very much!! I don't know about 'ever' but I'll take the compliment :) I have actually been debating writing a couple more chapters for some stuff on here. I may fully decide to plan and finish these soon. It's very encouraging when I hear that people are still reading my work. So we'll see!Thanks for the review! Report Review
oh no! lily and remus >Author's Response: oh no? come on, it's exciting!! Report Review
HAHA...this was really funny!! really like it.Author's Response: Thank you so much, its so great to see that people are still reading my stuff on here! Report Review
haha! this is a really nice story/chapter. Its good!!! :DAuthor's Response: Thank you kindly! Report Review
i just cracked up when james said 'what kind of idiot falls of a broom'. [i love moony...]Author's Response: I love moony too! (and james, of course, mustn't forget james). Report Review
I want a sirius too. :(
good stuffAuthor's Response: :) thanks so much Report Review
I think ill go with eating you, even if i am a vegetarian. I actually think it makes sense, i like the story very muchAuthor's Response: ah..how..strange :) Report Review
Hyper freakin venttalating...
HOW COULD YOU?!?!?
REMMIE IS SO. -er- I mean he's you know... -er- INCREDIBALY, HO -um... okay?
I feel epic mad at Lily!
Cheating on Remus with his BFF James?!?!
Who both LOVE Lily?!
Lily, Lily, Lily, Lily, Lily...
I have a feeling, if ya stayed with the AWESOMEST DUDE ON EARTH, Severus Snape, you would've had a less dramatic life...
What am I kidding?
Ur life would still be Jacked up...Potter would still be asking you, bothering Snape, Snape starting to drift to the Death Eaters, Hey, you'd be in the same spot...
Your life is jacked up by the Marauders.
No matter what...
LOLAuthor's Response: haha wow that is quite the other scenario..but i agree, life is messed up whatever way you take it! Report Review
Oh, well I could Have -nevermind, *Thinking of Dora* okay...
=PAuthor's Response: Aw, well don't get all sad on me! Report Review
Wow... Nice place to go Siri!
Well, I should've known! Werewolf, Quidditch, Siri saying that he solved most of his problems there...
And Lily, didn't know.
SHe had suspisions though right?
An ultimate FAN!
=PAuthor's Response: She probably did? Keep reading! haha thanks so much for reading and reviewing :) Report Review
Hm... I want a Sirius too!
ANd a Jamie -er- a James!
AND! A Remus... Of course...
I found out that I like Remus. Not James. Sorry Prongs!
I sound weird cause well, I'm talking about *twitch* Fictional *Twitch* characters...Author's Response: I know! Fictional characters do strange things to people!! I do love my Remus as well :) Report Review
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