{reviewid: 2442840, reviewer: 'georgeorpotterlover'}
30th November 2010:
get a move on what happens next?
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{reviewid: 2145085, reviewer: 'fashionist'}
19th June 2009:
Interesting, but you do need to work on your spelling and grammar. Keep it up, though (=
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{reviewid: 1518603, reviewer: 'hp4eva'}
16th July 2007:
kinda confusing and rushed. but overall i like it. keep writing, i need to kno what happens
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{reviewid: 1156311, reviewer: 'harry'}
7th October 2006:
I LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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{reviewid: 877300, reviewer: 'BrownEyedBaby'}
27th January 2006:
Wha?
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{reviewid: 638150, reviewer: 'dea'}
9th August 2005:
good very good. please keep going!!!!
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{reviewid: 223612, reviewer: 'ASlytherinLuvsAGryffindorGrl'}
24th August 2004:
Good! Can't wait to read chapter two!
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{reviewid: 169466, reviewer: 'amanda'}
13th June 2004:
I don't get it??
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{reviewid: 46481, reviewer: 'mariteri'}
18th June 2003:
\"Where is your books?\"
\"Where ARE your books?\"
\"Harry, I won\'t to break up with you.\"
\"Harry, I WANT to break up with you.\"
You see the problem? Grammer check. You need to do it or your readers will not have a clue what you have to write about.
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{reviewid: 41692, reviewer: 'mauibratt'}
1st May 2003:
i no get it
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{reviewid: 41707, reviewer: 'SERPENSORTIA'}
1st May 2003:
Rumors huh?.............................FINISH IT!!!!!!!!!
Oxxxxxx(================>
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{reviewid: 40046, reviewer: 'freind%20of%20a%20freind'}
26th March 2003:
I don\'t understand how you could do that.I mean just leave it hanging there please write the chapter really soon
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{reviewid: 38928, reviewer: 'Kelsey'}
20th March 2003:
Great story! Keep going!
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{reviewid: 39874, reviewer: 'M.J'}
20th March 2003:
That was cute!!! Um...what happens next?
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