What can i say!
Fabulous and heart-warming!
dennisudAuthor's Response: Aw. Thanks so much!!!!
This is such a beautiful story! I loved the ending! I'm such a big Harry/Hermione shipper that this story will capture my heart forever! Thank You so much for writeing this story!Author's Response: Wow, thank you so much for the wonderful review! I'm glad you liked it so much. Report Review
OMG! that was brilliantly written! the lyrics fit completely with the story, and the story was just written so well. this is defiantely gonna be added to my faves list! thx so much for sharin this! you're a great writer!=)Author's Response: Wow thanks! I do hope you'll read all of my songfics, that's usually what my one-shots are. I have a new one, but it's not up yet. I hope you'll look out for it though. It will be called 'Incomplete.' Report Review
you ar so good in writing Author's Response: Thank you. Report Review
The songfics you write are sweet and unique, but doesn't Hogwarts only go up to 8th year? Which would mean that Harry proposed when he was 18? In the muggle world, that would be like proposing right after high school ended. o.O Just a note.Author's Response: Actually, it goes to seventh year, and they were 17. And yes, he did propose right after school ended. That was the point. There's nothing wrong with a proposal...just so long as the marriage isn't rushed. Report Review
That was very sweet =) I better be going though. Sorry for the short review believe me this story was very well-written but I must be off. It's late and I gotta go to school. Have a good day, and great one-shot! It's going in my fav's.Author's Response: Thank you. I'm glad you liked it. Report Review
oh my gosh! that was soo sweet! i absolutely loved that!Author's Response: Thank you, I'm glad you enjoyed it. Hope you continue to read my other stories! Report Review
Here are some sentences that you may want to take into consideration for editing... (In chronological order) 'I, however, set mine down gingerly.' I might state the name of the broom for a more interesting description. '“All right, Dears. See you in the morning."' 'Dears' should not be capitalized. '“It’s a whole lot better here then at Little Winging.”' I think that it is spelled Little Whinging... I think. After that, it's quite good. : ) Poor Ron, being passed out. :PAuthor's Response: I'll consider it...I just don't get much time to look at the stuff I've finished already...but anyway, thanks for the reviews! Report Review
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Aww...So cute...*tear* loved it..
-KarinAuthor's Response: Thank you.
i LIKED it very very much'''
It's amazing''''Your're good:)Author's Response: Thank you, I'm glad you liked it. Hope you'll read my other stories. Report Review
wow good but very confusing.i realized u were going ahead in months. but were they even going out when he asked her to marry him? i didnt think they were now i dont knoAuthor's Response: yes they were. Read it again and look for the clues. It's all there.
I like your story its coming along well, I hope you continue writing! :)Author's Response: Well, I hope you don't think there's going to be more to this, because there's not. However, you're review made it sound like I don't write anything else. Actually, I do...I have a chapter story I'm working on, as well as two more songfics like this one and I'm writing an original novel as well. Anyway, glad you liked this. Report Review
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