{reviewid: 2233263, reviewer: 'MaskWithATruth'}
8th October 2009:
A very sweet chapter. This chapter really shows the degree of abuse Avianna is facing. Well done
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{reviewid: 2233254, reviewer: 'MaskWithATruth'}
8th October 2009:
Wow. Pretty good writing. Very tense and fast-paced. My only concern is your spelling and grammar. Don't mix 'your' with 'you're'. So far, so good.
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{reviewid: 1518191, reviewer: 'Rezofsunshine'}
16th July 2007:
McDonalds theme song--
do-do-do-do-do-I'm lovin' it!
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{reviewid: 1385114, reviewer: 'Monoxide_dreams'}
19th April 2007:
i lit this story alot, keep it up and update already!
=p
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{reviewid: 1270108, reviewer: 'Potterholic'}
18th January 2007:
Great chapter! I really like how you started the chapter. It raised a lot of questions: what happened during the years? why was she with the Malfoys and not Anna? I guess you wouldn’t tell me, though. ^_^ I also like how James, Sirius, and Snape met her, and also the fact that you included Peter. It’s maybe just me, but I don’t really like it when people leave him out in Marauders’ story. I also can’t help but wonder what Snape did to them that make them so mad. Good job! Keep it up!
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{reviewid: 1270026, reviewer: 'Potterholic'}
18th January 2007:
That was a great start. I really like how you wrote the action scenes and how you introduce Ava in the beginning. I also like how you wrote Ava using the Cruciatus Spell. She didn’t know anything about it, so it made sense that she wouldn’t know the consequences of the spell. The emotions were strong too. There were a couple of typos, but it’s nothing a beta can’t fix. Keep up the good work!
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{reviewid: 1100701, reviewer: 'Kaley%20Black'}
12th August 2006:
I'm not good at the whole flatter-the -author-and-maybe-she-or-he'll update-sooner.
but I thought I should give it a try.. your story rocks!
update soon!
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{reviewid: 1098736, reviewer: 'JenTigerPotter'}
10th August 2006:
Update soon?
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{reviewid: 981565, reviewer: 'Stinuli'}
8th May 2006:
Ahh.. I just want her to open up to someone allready.. Shell propably end up with Black, right? :) Great work! Cant wait for more... :D
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{reviewid: 981539, reviewer: 'sdgsag'}
8th May 2006:
wait could u also make it sb/oc and update...soon? please? im asking nicely....O:)
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{reviewid: 981535, reviewer: 'sdgsag'}
8th May 2006:
sooooo, can u please make her talk to lily again? u r gonna have her later trust lily and maybe even access to her diary? please? i think they both deserve to be best friends again, and i'd rather it happen sooner than later
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{reviewid: 824264, reviewer: 'SiMpLe_pLaN_RoCkS'}
23rd December 2005:
plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz update!!!!
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{reviewid: 818913, reviewer: 'katie%28hpreader120391%29%20to%20lazy%20to%20log%20in'}
| Review #13, by katie(hpreader120391) to lazy to log in | Green Potions |
19th December 2005:
only thing i have to say is.... update!!!!!
come on! pleassssssssse <3
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{reviewid: 796745, reviewer: 'Shadow00'}
4th December 2005:
Well, i most certainly love this story! please update soon!
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{reviewid: 794596, reviewer: 'demonik'}
3rd December 2005:
that was still good! Writers block happens all the time. It's nice to see a little change that she was actually nice to the MArauders, but still keeping that distance. Lily's next I suppose?
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{reviewid: 762640, reviewer: 'SiMpLe_pLaN_RoCkS'}
8th November 2005:
omg...that is so awesum! ur a really good writer...
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{reviewid: 749683, reviewer: 'Gemini'}
27th October 2005:
Hmmm, that wa a rather strange chapter, but good all the same. I'd like to know whats going on with her and the marauders. well i have to go. Good job and update soon.
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{reviewid: 748463, reviewer: 'fire_sprite_demon'}
26th October 2005:
Spectacular chapter as always! Sorry that I don't review every chapter... buuut I was trying to read the aaaall the chapters u have posted so fer before I take some meds and goto sleep.. Other then you should add a little romance to spice it up its wonderfully writen!
Toodles,
Lexi
P.s.And don't worry bout writers block EVERYONE gets it! Even if its for a couple mins. - Months... Lmao!
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{reviewid: 748317, reviewer: 'fire_sprite_demon'}
26th October 2005:
That's a depressing beginning, but, nonetheless excelent! Writing long? lmao well gtg and continue on reading...
Toodles,
Lexi
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{reviewid: 741594, reviewer: '%5B%7B-%7C%7Cii%7C%7C--%7C%7Cii%7C%7C--%7C%7Cii%7C%7C-%7D%5D'}
20th October 2005:
WHEN ARE YOU GOING TO UPDATE!?!?!?! ITS BEEN FOREVER!!!! THIS IS A GREAT STORY AND I WANT TO READMORE! PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!
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{reviewid: 685608, reviewer: 'demonik'}
7th September 2005:
ummm... when the next one coming out?
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{reviewid: 583925, reviewer: 'demonik'}
8th July 2005:
So Hagrid knows her mum... will she ever find out more about her stepdad as well?
Author's Response: i dunno, she might... :D
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{reviewid: 582057, reviewer: 'WindRider'}
7th July 2005:
I can't wait for the next chapter. I really like your story ^.^
Author's Response: its on its way, just gotta keep myself from flipping out about the ever closer 6th book coming out in 1 week to edit it. thanks for reviewing
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{reviewid: 581480, reviewer: 'Gemini'}
6th July 2005:
WoW A Great Chapter. I Think That Ava and Sirius Will Get Together =D Update Soon Please, I'm Really Looking Foreward To See What Will Happen Next.
Author's Response: Next chapter will be up soon, might not be up for a little though cause i've got school registration. But it will be as soon as possible, thanks for readin and reviewing
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{reviewid: 581466, reviewer: 'Shadow00'}
6th July 2005:
yayyy keep up the great work!! Sirius is so sweet!
Author's Response: ^.^ Thanks so much.
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