I loved it but what's up with the cursing it's so cool!! Report Review
Well, it was... entertaining. There was a lot of swearing and the only thing that bothered me was that in the book J.K. Rowling uses the nickname 'mione For Hermione. Oh and you wrote "cuz" which doesn't sound very adult to be coming from her mother. But, for a first AU story I thought it was really good, you have a talent for bringing out emotions. Keep it up! Report Review
OMG MALFOYS MORE THAN KINDA CUTE!! ;D Hehe. YouReadMyStory, IReadYours. ;] GREAT so far!! -AddsToFavourites- You like Blink-182? hevski_44@hotmail.com <---- email me Report Review
It’s good for your first fanfiction. Here’s a little C/C: If Angel had just arrived at Hogwarts that would mean she was elevenish, I highly doubt she would be using curse words. Before you post your chapter paste it into Word Processor or whatever you use, and run spell check. Set the scene more. Adjectives and adverbs are your friend. Overall it’s good for your first fanfiction. A review in return is always appreciated. Report Review
I love it!!!!!!! keep writing U R good at it!!!!!!!!! Report Review
This was a great story! I don't know why nobody else hasn't submitted a review!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Can you read my stories? P&TY!!! Report Review
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