it sounds good contine and ill read it! Report Review
Aww I love your ending of the first chapter. Its so cute, I hope the next chapter will be about zoos, I know that sounds odd but I love animals, heh, there were a few spelling and grammer errors but nothing to bad, and it was definitly interesting. I liked how you got Dudly a girlfriend and brought out Hermione, keep it up! Report Review
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