{reviewid: 1645811, reviewer: 'Maesygirl'}
27th September 2007:
STILL TOO SHORT! This was tiny!
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{reviewid: 1645809, reviewer: 'Maesygirl'}
27th September 2007:
well - I know this is an old fic, but I can find many problems with it.
1. The chapters too short
2. There's a lot of spelling mistakes
3. You have put this story as a one-shot and it isn't.
Okay? But overall other than tha tit was okay.
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{reviewid: 801285, reviewer: 'bookobsessed'}
7th December 2005:
might i lightly recomend spell check? sorry its just, i like the story i just had a bit of trouble reading it. Thats all. I mean no offesnse or anything. ( :
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{reviewid: 801282, reviewer: 'bookobsessed'}
7th December 2005:
might i lightly recomend spell check? sorry its just, i like the story i just had a bit of trouble reading it. Thats all. I mean no offesnse or anything. ( :
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{reviewid: 767758, reviewer: 'wonderwitch'}
12th November 2005:
God...what's wrong with your spelling. That's the only minus point.
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{reviewid: 346367, reviewer: 'Gretel%20-%20Potter'}
23rd January 2005:
Your grammer and spelling is REALLY bad! Don't you know how to write a proper story?????
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{reviewid: 222621, reviewer: 'audrey'}
23rd August 2004:
please write more
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{reviewid: 45058, reviewer: 'anya'}
6th June 2003:
you should really add more
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{reviewid: 43863, reviewer: 'Herm'}
29th May 2003:
hey continue writing it\'s great but the 2nd chapter was really short.
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{reviewid: 40919, reviewer: 'sablesnape'}
19th April 2003:
sorry....although i am sure that this is a great story, i think you ned to proof read. There were so many spelling mistakes in the first few sentences alone that i gave up...but good try...keep working at it
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{reviewid: 39860, reviewer: 'DangerPotter'}
20th March 2003:
Continue CONTINUE CONTINUE CONTINUE JUST CONTINUE
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{reviewid: 39802, reviewer: 'DangerPotter'}
18th March 2003:
DUDE U NEED CONTINUE WRITING THIS BECUZ THIS MIGHT GET INTERESTING
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