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Review #1, by Sophia Montgomery

4th March 2005:

I like this story, even though this first chapter is hard to tell what the story in all is about. There is an part that you might want to fix- 'Then Mrs. Granger walked over and gave them both breakfast and joined them to eat.' Served works better than gave... Good job on this!

Author's Response: Thanx for the advice! I love constructive criticism :)

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Review #2, by sweetangel

Diagon Alley

3rd March 2005:

i think it is really good... please update soon.

Author's Response: Salad. That's all I have to say.

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Review #3, by em

Diagon Alley

2nd March 2005:

good, interesting, but hermione's family is a little to perky sounding and happy go lucky. but w/e it was pretty good

Author's Response: lol, I agree! I might change that in the future, so thanx for letting me know :) *~Lionpaws~*

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Review #4, by TheScarlettLetter

Diagon Alley

2nd March 2005:

Aren't expos just the most *urg!* sometimes(?) *chuckling* I know, I feel your pain. Nice start =)

Author's Response: Yea.. they are, lol. Thanks so much for reviewing! :) I have the next chapter done so it should be up soon... hopefully! :D *~Lionpaws~*

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