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Review #1, by Eve In Love With Harry

30th August 2005:
That was very good. Keep writing!

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Review #2, by Elf_ears13 In Love With Harry

17th April 2005:
Aww, it was cute! It was really sweet! Some of your sentences seemed a bit. . odd. I don't mean this in a bad way, I'm just saying that, for example, your last sentence could use some commas, instead of just using "and" all the time. But of course it's your writing, your fic, your style! Do whatever you want! Oh, and I read your other review. . .just to let you know, you can do multi-chaptered fics here (I actually have two).

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