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Review #1, by Maelody meeting cho

6th March 2014:
Hey! I've noticed this story says complete, and I don't really know the last time you updated around here, but this story really has a chance to be great! :) I have a similar story, where the girl goes to Hogwarts late in life and really against her will. It's fun, isn't it? I think with a little editing, this could really shine! :D

I like how Cho was so sweet, even though she was a little perplexed as to how a girl raised by magical folk could be so clueless on the magical world. It is just a little shocking, though. Wouldn't her parents bring it up at least once?

It's a shame to see abandoned stories, but I understand real life gets in the way sometimes. I hope you never quit this hobby, and that you've found the muse you want to write about! Good luck! :)


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