{reviewid: 2748646, reviewer: 'goody2shoes'}
27th October 2012:
Congrats on winning a Dobby for this! I give you an 8/10 for the first chap.
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{reviewid: 2706832, reviewer: 'Ida'}
10th June 2012:
That was just amazing. But I really want it to continue!
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{reviewid: 2673267, reviewer: 'problembarn'}
17th March 2012:
bloody brilliant omfg. x
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{reviewid: 2649390, reviewer: 'luna_lovely'}
26th January 2012:
i don't normally read marauders era fics, but after reading some of your other works i had to give this one a chance :) im glad i did because i have really enjoyed reading it!
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{reviewid: 2634131, reviewer: 'Alex'}
26th December 2011:
Magnificent, absolutely wonderful! To be truthful I actually read halfway through the sequel before I realized that i was supposed to read this first. WHOOPSIES!!
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{reviewid: 2609731, reviewer: 'Mrs%20Sirius%20Black'}
30th October 2011:
That was a lovely ending to the story. I feel sad for Sirius poor guy :(
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{reviewid: 2609135, reviewer: 'Mrs%20Sirius%20Black'}
29th October 2011:
So who is the mysterious girl?
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{reviewid: 2609122, reviewer: 'Mrs%20Sirius%20Black'}
29th October 2011:
This chapter nearly made me cry :(
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{reviewid: 2609118, reviewer: 'Mrs%20Sirius%20Black'}
29th October 2011:
The last line.. "James nodded and the Marauders each raised their wands and softly, in unison, they murmured “mischief managed,” before slipping out the doorway." was a lovely way to finish it off.
I like the idea that the Marauders came up with the moving staircases.. pretty cool.
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{reviewid: 2608676, reviewer: 'Mrs%20Sirius%20Black'}
28th October 2011:
ewww Lily and Snape gross
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{reviewid: 2608670, reviewer: 'Mrs%20Sirius%20Black'}
28th October 2011:
I don't know if i like the whole 'Dumbledore has a motive behind everything he does'...
Poor Lily, the way Sirius treated her made me sad :(
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{reviewid: 2608661, reviewer: 'Mrs%20Sirius%20Black'}
28th October 2011:
This chapter was great, your point of view about Sirius's childhood, family and how Regulus was recruited was interesting and well though out.
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{reviewid: 2608567, reviewer: 'Mrs%20Sirius%20Black'}
28th October 2011:
This chapter made me feel so emotional, poor Lily and Sirius :( what happened to his chest? I'm sure there wasn't another person in the room.. I guess I'll find out in the next chapter.. by the way this chapter was great :)
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{reviewid: 2608565, reviewer: 'Mrs%20Sirius%20Black'}
28th October 2011:
Poor Sirius :( Looks like Peter is already close with the death eaters hmm..
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{reviewid: 2608559, reviewer: 'Mrs%20Sirius%20Black'}
28th October 2011:
This chapter was amazing! It got me hooked from the first sentence, the characters are well written and the chapter flowed very nicely.
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{reviewid: 2539026, reviewer: 'spinx'}
27th June 2011:
Hmm.why is it.that, everytime I have read your stories, I feel just a tad bit more grown-up than before?
It must have benn more than four year since I discovered you. God, I cannot believe it; my old reviews are still up here, hidden on some page, for all the world to see.
Four years.I will be forever grateful.
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{reviewid: 2517843, reviewer: 'Charlotte'}
5th May 2011:
I've just read the whole story in one go and I must say I loved it! I actually felt as though it was part of J.K. Rowling's story giving information on what life was like before Harry. All I can say is well done :) x
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{reviewid: 2483161, reviewer: 'Jay_HPFF'}
20th February 2011:
A very evocative piece of writing, that held me throughout the chapter. This is the first of your stories I have read, but I have no doubt I will be reading more.
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{reviewid: 2459622, reviewer: 'clowsan'}
4th January 2011:
Beautiful and Tragic. Everything about this story send shiver down my spine. Your words create such a powerful imagery, absolutely fascinating.
I am relative new to Sirius/Lily but this just sealed the deal. You write them so real, powerful and not to mention sexy... I really envy you and your talent. Hoping for more.
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{reviewid: 2449429, reviewer: 'Mrs%20Padfoot'}
13th December 2010:
This is good introductory chapter, cider is alcoholic though...
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{reviewid: 2435985, reviewer: 'doberman'}
15th November 2010:
wow... that was an incredible story... everything was so deep and... im not a big sirius/lily fan but that was just amazing! im so glad i read it u r a wonderful author i cant wait to read the other stories u have written, although i thnk i may have to read a happy/funny one be4 i read any more of urs to put me in a happyer mood!!! haha
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{reviewid: 2435925, reviewer: 'doberman'}
15th November 2010:
aah i loved this chap. i def. liked the happy change for once! it was an ingenious way to bring some happines and funniness and everything into this wonderful story!!! i love it so far thanx for writing such a great story!!
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{reviewid: 2383567, reviewer: 'The%20Golden%20Trio'}
22nd July 2010:
That was a great first chappie! You are a wonderful writer and I can't think of anything you need to improve on!
xoxo TGT
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{reviewid: 2347156, reviewer: 'missmasquerade'}
14th May 2010:
Wow I loved it! I love how Sirius just plants the kiss on her. It was so... spontaneous. I just adored it, and it really, really gets the reader anxious to read more. Great chapter, I'm off to read the rest!
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{reviewid: 2312691, reviewer: 'Anda'}
12th March 2010:
The last line was absolutely brillant.
As was the rest of the story, but that last line. Simply wonderful.
Great job writing such an interesting and amazing story. It left me almost speechless.
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