Very good!!! Although I think you changed from present to past tense in the story... anyhow, I liked it a lot! Report Review
Good story!!! I like how you have Lily's thoughts planned out!!! Report Review
It was so romantic! Loved It!!!! Report Review
absulotly fabulose. Please continue (lol i cant spell)Author's Response: i will soon please bear with me! Report Review
cool please continue Report Review
hehe interesting chapter! good start!! update soon!!Author's Response: thabk you! I should have one today Report Review
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