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Review #1, by Healer_25 Remembering

15th February 2005:
If you added a bit more of descriptive text it would make the story more interesting, show their inner feelings and frustrations, their hand gestures, the things they see, etc. Otherwise its coming along fine.

Author's Response: Thankies! No guarantees tho, i never said i wuz a gud riter. :D

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