Just clearing my 'favs' and realised I didn't review this. Sorry, but better late than never! I really enjoyed it, like the Mark Evans character, that he was good and bad. Also the 'end of Sirius' was done nicely. It's really well written and I will check out your other stories soon,
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cant wait to read ur next story Report Review
Good start! Plz, read and review my fic! Report Review
That was a beautiful story. You're so talented in the way that you write.Author's Response: I don't know how to thank you for your very good review. I really appreciated it. If you're interested, I've also published a sequel to this FF, and the title is "Secrets from the Future." Bye for now! Report Review
that was a realy rivatin story keep up the good work Report Review
I don't really like your story. I will admit that I am not an author and you write better than I do. So my words may not be the best thing to guid you in your work. However, I feel that much of your story so far has been either unoriginal or two dimensional and lacks depth. When harry snaps at his friends, it is expected given his stress, but he stops immediately after only one comment even though it is a flood of emotions overwhelming him. Hermione can 'read him well' even though she is observing the obvious--he mourns the loss of Sirius. He easily plays into Draco's ploy's and comments without thought. These are a few examples. I think with work the story could be better. But right now, it only tells what the characters are doing... but does not give any depth into the thoughts behind the characters.Author's Response: Hi Bob! I thank you very much for your interesting review. I need to tell you that I've started writing this story a long time ago ( about in year 2003 ) and that my way of writing has become better since then. I'm sorry that you didn't like the first chapters, but I can assure you that the story gets better in every new chapter and now I'm ending the sequel of it, Secrets from the Future, and I'm really proud of myself. Hope to have you as one of my readers again. Report Review
i must say that was a great Story!!! im a sucker for harry/hermione fics :)Author's Response: I thank you so much! I really appreciated your review. Love, Petronilla Report Review
i must say that was a great Story!!! im a sucker for harry/hermione fics :) Report Review
Thoroughly enjoyed your story..i read it in one sitting. Can't wait to read the sequel.Author's Response: Thank you so much! I hope you'll enjoy the sequel, Secrets from the Future. Report Review
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I love it so far! Author's Response: ... and you haven't read the sequel yet!!! Report Review
Flowed well and was easy to read.
Am just starting the sequel.
Thankyou for a story that is realistic and yet satisfying.
Congratulations again!Author's Response: Sorry for replying you so late, but I just wanted to let you know that I really appreciated your review. Thank you very, very much! Report Review
V.Good, easy to read.
Perfect for late nights trying to do homework.
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I'm wondering how people can be that cruel, especially towards the person they love... I would/could never do such a thing (they would have to put serious effort into upsetting me enough). But that can't really be generalised. ButI anyway, like your story. Author's Response: Oh my! This is a fictional work, not true life !!!!!!!! Come on!!!!!!!!
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Why do 90% of the authors think that Harry gets top marks everywhere (history of magic, divination...). A little more sense for reality, please!Author's Response: Can I give you a suggestion? Don't focus too much on silly details like Harry's school marks!!!!! In this way you'd be able to appreciate the whole story...
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I fully agree with your author's note, and addtionally it will take some time to give reasons why the dynamics between the three change as your story doesn't necessarily agree with the books as far as that is concerned.Author's Response: Exactly! My story doesn't agree with the Jo Rowling official books, mainly because my story is a Harry/Hermione romance one! And if you had a look at it, I may assume that you don't agree either with the official Harry Potter books, since in them Harry and Hermione are just friends and not a couple! That's what Fan Fictions are for, isn't it? To give us the possibility to dream a different ending...
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i like it! i like it!
good! yeah.... Report Review
I really enjoyed this. Of all the H/Hr fics I've read (and I've read a lot!) this comes closest to the books both in style and charactarisation. I was a bit worried by Harry's elemental powers as a lot of fanfic writer really go over the top on that sort of thing but you were very restrained. Excellent!Author's Response: I thank you so much, David. I really appreciated your review. I did my best on this story and enjoyed writing it, but I got the precious help of my two american BETA readers, who have been really great. If you're interested, I've already published the sequal on this web site. The title is Secrets from the Future. Please, if you read it, let me know what you think about it.
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WOW how long did all that take ? !
well, i havnet read it all but :P it seems VERY long. im guna print it all (200+pages) and read it and let my fwnds borrow it :P lols well congrats on dat long story ! Report Review
OMG ARE YOU GOING TO MAKE A SEQIL PZ MAKE A SEQIL I AM STUNED IT WAS IT WAS..... BRILL BLOODY BRILL Report Review
P.S. i like ur ending Report Review
ok first good job
2nd hermione would turn 17 after harry turns 17 cause if she turned 17 before harry did thenshe would be a yaer older than everybody in that year Report Review
Professor McGonagall is the "Deputy" Head Mistress, not the "Vice" Head Mistress! Report Review
this story was great! good job! Report Review
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