wow! evil dumbledore! its really good...and really scary, just the thought that Harry could be on the wrong side...do you really think that or is it just something that came to you? Report Review
That was a really interesting, well written story. I love the plot, probably the only fic I've ever read portraying Dumbledore as a puppet master. It makes perfect sense too. Great story. Report Review
Thats amazing, how did you come up with it?Author's Response: Truthfully? I was listening to my beta critique my not-so-nice version of Dumbledore in another fic and I thought "Hey -- what if it was just an act? The grandfather thing?" It just sort of clicked after that. Throw in the whole 'true Slytherin' bit borrowed from a discontinued fic and viola! Report Review
Oh. My. God. That completely makes me rethink everything, although I still think Dumbledore is on Harry's side, but that was... amazing. Brilliant. Report Review
This story was absolutely wonderful. In that scary, chill-giving, kind of way, of course. I love that you took Dumbledore and played out a different view of him. Your writing style is terrific. Amazing job. Report Review
Brilliant, this is the best fan fiction story i've read on Albus Dumbledore. In my opinion i would have placed him in either Slytherin/ Ravenclaw for obvious reasons.
Their have been three Powerful Wizards i dare say that others cannot rival, Dumbledore, Voldemort & Bartemius Crouch Senior in the 1st war. The way Barty rose through the ranks within the Ministry.
Funny how they are leaders in their own right, OoTP, DE's & Barty would have probably become MOM if his son was not caught. Anyway great story. Report Review
a truly fantastic original story Report Review
Excellent; a work of art. How did you come up with the plot? It's ingenious! :) Report Review
This is a really good story. Very well written. :) Report Review
simply amazing! that was great! Report Review
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