thats a very good story a little to much cuing if you ask me but you had me lughing and rolling arround on the floor please do continue. (sorry about the spelling arrores) 10/10 Report Review
Wow, I love Griffith. He's so great, I wish I had a teacher like him... MS :) Report Review
Well, good chapter... I'm tired and lazy, I'll read the rest later... Report Review
Check plus! It was really good, I like how it's from Ron's POV (kinda) and not the whole trio's POV (kinda) I shall read on, M.S. :) Report Review
Write more! Or I'll... do something. I'll... plague you like Moaning Myrtle and act like her! Bwahaha! There we go. Report Review
romantic and it is my fav Report Review
i really ejoyed your story and would like you to write more
Great story I hope theres more Report Review
Did you really have to use the word '<<tag not allowed="red">tag not allowed="red">censored' that much? Oh, well...good chapter! Report Review
ooOOooo, intenceness! update soon please! Report Review
ha! she did not drink it! Report Review
ron is so evil!!!!!!!!! i will kick his asre! Report Review
woah! ANGER PROBLEMS! Report Review
someone update this please im sooooo bored with out any updates Report Review
I think Ron is really bad in your fan fiction. I don't like it from his point of view. I want it more to focus on the Harry/Hermione romance with a jealous Ron, not a violent, raving lunatic Ron. You made Ron seem so unlike himself. Well written, though. Author's Response: I understand that you want it more H/Hr. But, sadly, that's not the plot of the fic. The reason why I have the fic in the H/Hr section is because I wasn't sure whether to put it in either H/Hr, action, or humor. Then, I thought that most H/Hr fans like to see Ron's POV from when H/Hr get together and I decided to go with that. Ron's unlike himself because the fic's supposed to be funny and I just make some characters feel unlike themselves for this. Thanx, though! Report Review
Wow, the people in your story have very sweet tempers, don't they? Author's Response: Yes, they do. lol Report Review
I soooo LUV Griffith. There's still a lot of cussing and stuff--it'll be hard for me to get used to that. After all, I've never cussed in my entire life, but STILL this fan fic IS REALLY REALLY GOOD! Keep it up! Author's Response: Thanx a lot! Report Review
AAAAHH!!!! This is THE BEST FAN FIC EVER!!!! I'm still a little disoriented by all the language, but it's excellent all the same. I really like Griffith, but did he have a wand with him when Malfoy came. Urrgh, I hate that little ferret-ball! Continue this fan fic, PLEASE!!! Author's Response: Well, Griffith did have a wand, but he didn't bother using it. He'll do that throughout the fic. Report Review
Good! I love H/Hr/R fan fics and this is the best out of all of them so far! Keep up the good work! Author's Response: I will! Report Review
I really like you'r 2nd version. I still think that the 1st one was better.
Author's Response: Really? Oh... Well, I thought it was good, too, but stupid me thought I was never going to come back here after account deletion so... goodbye all old stories! But, all of them (okay, maybe most of them) will be back! Report Review
am i first to review?
well it was a gr8 chapter i loved it and i hope more reveiw soon luv sophieAuthor's Response: I will! I can assure you of that! Report Review
OOOOOh!!!!! Ron is EVIL!!! Love it!!!! =D can't wait to see what will happen!
-Siriusluver ^_^Author's Response: You'll find out soon! =) Report Review
good job please post the next chapter soonAuthor's Response: Okay, I will! Report Review
ooooh, cool. i hope ron gets all evil n kills harry *evil laugh*. update soon. xxxAuthor's Response: .... okay.... Report Review
well... definately a good idea, but they tend to hire people who don't burst out, and they don't swear. Otherweise, I liked it, but the little voice in his head sounds stupid... like it has no idea what it is doing... you should make it smarter.
Other than that, great!
Crystal ^_^Author's Response: Well, the little voice goes from stupid to smart, then stupid again. The thing is: It knows a good plan, but when it is time to back things up... You're on your own. And, unlike in my original version of the story, you'll find out how Griffith got the position as teacher. Report Review
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