Best story EVEEER!!! Report Review
really good xxx yn is it in a funnttense n some of the yous did'nt make sense xx good though xx Report Review
i LOVE the twins. they're so cute. but i think the whole finishing each others sentence is clique. but this was a good first chapter. i also like the way you make serena all nervous shy around oliver instead of being confidant, cause then i can empathize with her. can't wait to read the next chapters ^_^ Report Review
omg srry to say but this story was annoying to read bc its all like "you roll your eyes" "your finger" you you you your your. Report Review
this is a really good story. i'm enjoying myself read about this new character. i just wanted to point out that in this chapter you said sara's dad was a keeper but when they were looking at the picture album you said chaser. so which one is it? good job on the story. Report Review
starting to get used to it a little more. it is getting less annoying ^^
great chapter Report Review
sorry, but i dont like the whole my point of view. it is really annoying.
i do like the plot and the way u write. i just wish u wouldnt write in that point of view. i have read another story with taht view. i dont think it was one of ur others. u only have one other, i think, so but anyway. i got used to it, but it did always nag on my concetration and what not.
i will continue to read, because i love oliver stories, and maybe i will learn to appreciate the whole my-point-of-view thing, because u seem to write very well.
we shall see.
dont mean to be mean
Love ya ^^ i really do :D
anyways.. on i go with the next chapter. Report Review
Aww. This is so cute. I am glad you didn't have him propose there. It wouldn't have been very realistic. So, is that what the my dad and Oliver were talking about that he couldn't tell me?
Good job Report Review
ur nifty.. i liked it =] Report Review
name him earl :] Report Review
now i kno that it must either be malfoy or flint.. but either way... i kno she is going to kick his ass =] Report Review
ohh.. my bad.. i thougth McGonnagol was crying for their young love.. MY BAD.. NEXT TIME I'LL FINISH THE STORY BEFORE I REVIEW IT LOL Report Review
hahaha.. crying in her hankerchief.. thats pretty funny lol thats pretty spiffy =] Report Review
I love your Story! I cant think of words to describe it!
Much Report Review
wow this is a beautiful story!!! it truly is! real cute and all! im just about to start the sequel! keep writing! xXx Report Review
Wowzers! Good stuff! Love Fred and George! Report Review
YAY!! I'm not an Orphan!!! *Does the happy dance,and throws out the orphan annie costume* Guess I won't be needing that anymore. *Countinues the happy dance* Report Review
Wuts a pizza toe??? Report Review
hahaha...very appropriate chapter title lol!~Jaymee Report Review
Okay, saaaaad! I'll read the sequel=) Report Review
AAAAAH! LOVE IT!!!! Oliver is sooooo cute. Loved the fist-fight=) Report Review
I loved it... But fist-fight? Well, if he doesn't get hurt...! Report Review
In the 8th chapter it says 'your' father was a chaser. Now it says he's a keeper...! But I loved it anyways =) Ahhhh.... Who is it??? Report Review
AH! Can't wait to know but can't read now. EEEH! Okay, will read as soon as possible, I love this story, I really do!!! Report Review
Hah. Ehm, I like it alot. Will read the rest later, promise. Buhbye=) Report Review
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