Sense youve been so nice to read and review on my story i thought i would check out some of your work. This particular story has a good story line to it so far, but your to plain; there don't seem to be anough detail or emotion in it. To make your story better if your interested in that, just add more of that stuff to it. I know im not the that good at it either, but no one seems to want to tell me so.Author's Response: :D Thank you, I love knowing what I can do better and for a next chapter I'll be sure to try and put more detail and emotion in.
Problem with my reviews is that I always like or dislike a story and I can't give people things to improve, thats a pity, caus I love it when people review and tell em what I can do better. So a BIG thank you to you! -XxX-Marjolein Report Review
I like it! I especially like how her dreams come true. That's kinda cool.I hope that u will update this story soon!
Author's Response: I will as soon as I can, glad you like it!!! -XxX-Marjolein Report Review
very interesting! I cant wait to see where this leads to!Author's Response: :D To tell you the truth me neither!!! :D -XxX-Marjolein Report Review
oooo. kool!! i LUV it!!!!!!!!!!!
i want more!!!!
UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!!!Author's Response: I'm glad you love it I will update soon!!! Report Review
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