Hermione's comment about Draco's arse being nice was a bit "out of character"... she hates his guts and wouldn't say such a thing about him.
But it's a nice beginning, do keep writing it.

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first of all, DON'T BEG...Seriously it looks terrible, people will review when they want to review and not because you begged for them. They are actually less likely to from begging.
I can't see Harry saying those things to the Dudleys...I know he hates them, but he isn't that stupid.

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haha! "fat v" good job! 10/10! i'm glad harry got out of there!
-xoxo, rowenaravenclaw94

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lol that's hilarious! i officially love this story! it's soo funny! more please!!!

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hey atropa it IS a kodak moment for sure! and who in their right mind wouldn't review this story?!

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WEll, that was an, okay beggining, but I couldn't understand what on earth was going on. It was very confusing and seemed to be a bit random, you know. It is a good story, though.

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Wow... this seems like the beginning of a great story... UPDATE SOON!

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pretty good, write some more :)

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HEY! I LOVED THE STORY!!!!!!!!! TOTALY AWSOM. BUT ONE SMALL QUESTION... COULD YOU UPDATE SOOOOOOOOOOOOON I WANT TO READ MORE. maschan PS- 'GOLDFISH' HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA. AND YES, IT IS KODAK MOMENT AND YES, IN AMERICA, WE DO HAVE KODAK! AGAIN, PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!! maschan

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UPDATE, UPDATE, UUUUUPDAAAAAAATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!WANT MORE.............................................................................................................................................................................................................................................PWEASE(WIFF SUGA ON TOP) maschan

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hello!!!!I think this was pretty good,maybe if you put up another chapter you'll get...a bigger audience:)

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