When I first saw this was about Hermione and Sirius, I immediately didn't like it. But after reading this, I'll have to add them to my list of HP pairs I like. They were better than I thought, and I liked the twists you threw in about Harry not waking up, Hermione being pregnant, Hermione loving Harry, and Sirius loving Lily. Great job!

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This a very interesting story. It's a little confusing though right towards the end. I wish you had explained that a little better.

What really interests me is that ruby glow. What causes it and why does it occur between Sirius and Hermione? Argh! So many question and yet this is nothing more than a one-shot. This story has the potential to be a full-fledged story.

alias093001, Slytherin.

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wow... just wow!
i loved it all the way through!

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But-but... This can't be a complete one-shot... There has to be morrre! Haha, I wanna keep reading!

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The ending was amazing! Totally did not expect that.
It was a bit confusing at places, i did not fully understand it.
but great story anyways.

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Interesting. For some reason, I've never read a Sirius/Hermonie fic before this one, even though Sirius is one of my favorite characters, so reading this story was a fun and new experience for me.

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Ooh. This is cool, but quite confusing ahhahah.
I couldn't figure most of i out... but ohwell. I liked it. :D

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please write a sequel to this! i love hermione/maurader stories.

i_love_harry_12721

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OMG..!! Did harry listen to everything..?!?! as in EVRYTHING?!!?.. [lol] wow this was intense..!! and incredibly awesome.!!

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I've never read a Hermione/Sirius fanfictions before, but it was really good (: 'm going to read more of your fanfictions soon

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This was a rather unusaul idea for a fanfiction i must say. Your writing is rather weak in certain places, simple, boring almost. The story in itself was ok, very original, very different. Great banner aswell, i liked your first paragraph in particular, it was a very good start to the story, caught my attention straight way.
All in all it did drag, but i enjoyed reading it none the less, so despite the faults with your writing, i will give this fanfiction a 9/10!

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Hehe, can anyone say compromising position?? Great story.

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Very nice one-shot! Definitely unique and well-written!

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I simply cannot believe that this is a one-shot!!! I love it, adore it, look up to the damm story even!! I got winded and followed it word-by-word... and then... BAM! one-shot with a cliffie ending! So, I am asking you, from the bottom of my heart to please, please, please make this a NOT one-shot and update sooN! ;) pretty please?

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O...M...G!!! lol i loved it. kinda wierd having sirius portrayed as a lover but it was still great.the cliff-hanger is really good and all but dont forget to write more! i am dying to know what happens! :) Keep up the awesome work!

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Beautiful story. :)

Lovely twist at the end.

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When I checked to see if this was a one-shot or not I must say I was devistated to see it was. This was superb, you ought to continue it, the world can always use some more Sirius/Hermione fics.

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very nice, i must say.

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Hmmm... interesting to say the least. Not sure how I feel about Hermione being intimate with Sirius if she was pregnant with Harry's child. Good writing.

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weird
got confusing at some points but nice one
i have been thinking to include this in my new story idea but lets see
this one story gives me inspiration though

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holy mother trucker are you serious?ahha "no im sirius " lol but this is a good story intense and dramatic and keeps you wanting to read :]

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Oh... Harry! :D Wonderfull, just as I want a good love story

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Wow, that was really different. Some parts seemed a bit rushed, though. I think this could do with a bit of an edit. There were parts that confused me a bit and that seemed too rushed. You could have slowed down a bit and explained things a bit more.
But I thought the ideas were really interesting.
I actually cringed when they realized Harry was there. How awkward! lol. Anyway, good job. I love all your writing.

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Wow, what in the world could Harry be thinking? Waking up to finding them. And Hermione, she is going to be in so much shock! I would be if I were in her position, though who wouldn't want to be with Sirius :) Great story!

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Dang. That was good, really, I enjoyed it! That's crazy, I can tell there will be a lot of Drama in this one! I hope you update soon!!

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