Thing is, I absolutely adore this story, but I'm afraid to read past this point. :(
I know it will be amazing, but Gods!
You do too well writing. Report Review
Great job! It was super creative and the details and imagery were awesome. :) I adored this story. Report Review
hey , it is really an excellent story , but u know its quite unfair , to leave us hanging like that .How about a sequel ?pls think about it . Report Review
I must say... Thus far, I'm really liking your story. (: It's probably the only Dramione on this site (aside from Hunting the Hunters) that I plan to read all the way. I prefer creepy Draco to OOC fluffy Draco... Which is how all the other authors on this site seem to portray him. I'm just wondering how their relationship is gonna work? I mean, he said to her face that he wishes her dead... And he'd be the one to do it. If someone said that to me, I'd be hurt beyond words because no one should ever wish ill on anyone, and I'd never be able to forgive him much less love him. Report Review
Fab, Absolutely Fab-U-Lous! (Or however you spell it ;) ) It was probably the 2nd best FanFic Ive ever Read, And I've read many! Report Review
I loved this story you did a great job!! Report Review
This chapter like the first was so... intense. the way you word what's happening is astonding. Have you ever considered writing a book of your own?
The mind can be a powerful but frightening thing it seems. Too many truths about ones self or another's self can be found in it. Much as I'm Draco and Hermione are to find out in Magik class.
Amdeus is interesting. Is he an animagus? He seems a little shifty, but then again most of the best character in works of literature are, such as Snape, or if you've ever read
Beautiful Creatures, Macon Ravenwood.
thanks for the book suggestion. Itr sounds familar, so I think i'll read it.
--Gin-gin Report Review
Great first chapter! I love the way you portray Snape's character in it. And them having to spill secrets to each other: perfect! Grammar was fantastico (I think that's how you spell it). Expecting another one as good as the first.
--Gin-gin Report Review
I don't actually know whether you (and other storytellers) read/receive reviews for completed stories, of if they help at all, but I don't think couraging and constructive critisism never hurt too much :)
There are two minor spelling mistakes in this text that for some reason bother me. The word "bare" is mentioned in the scene in the desert by the lake, but it's probably unintentionally spellt "bear". The other one is about the word "hell", which comes up quite a few times in this and the following chapter. I would not write it with a capital letter, but perhaps it is a matter of style :)
I'm dreading to finish this novel but at the same time I don't want it to end! Report Review
Did I magically miss the part when Malfoys nose got healed o.O I thought Ron broke it earlier but I might have added it myself : D
Your way of writing is very catchy and fascinating, although there are too many split chapters - why not just name them differently? Report Review
great story, really powerful. It was constantly surprising and kept me on edge. Sad at times when I thought it wasn't going to work out and when I thought Ron was dead. But it's all great by the end and I loved it! Great job! Report Review
I just hope that they had the happy ending I imagine they had. This is so beautifully written- I read it all in a day! I hope you can continue to write, wherever you are in your life! Report Review
This is so nice! I like how original this is and the plot, well, it's really well-thought of! Great job! Hope to read more. :) Report Review
I absolutely love this story!! It's very violent, but not so graphic. SO graphic... It's very intimate between Hermione and Draco, and I love that because it actually explains in physicality how much they love each other, and I love their emotional and mental problems together. It's funny and deep at the same time. My favorite part is when Draco tries to bring Hermione's mind back by reading to her, talking to her, and stuff like that. It shows Draco's true feelings. And I love Draco in this story, how he goes from a freakin' physco and evil creeper, to a soft, and loveable guy.. His man vs. man conflict is AWESOME!! All in all, I love this story and how you've made the characters. Yes, I'm late in reading this, but I want you to know that this story is AMAZING and one of my absolute favorites. You're very good at Dramione fanfiction... Keep going :) Report Review
wow. amazing opening. Report Review
TOOK BLOODY LONG ENOUGH (their love being declared, i mean) i love Dramionee and this story is AMAZING Report Review
WHOA. That was really well done. The plot was really imaginative and very original. Nice work. Report Review
my friend showed me this story .. and you know what? i've been stucked with my computer everytime i had chance to just read!
you are a really good writer! you really catch your reader. and i like the way you describe things to detailed.
keep up the good work ;) Report Review
Great Job! Loved the story! Good Dramione fanfic is tough so congrats on a job well done! :) Report Review
I'm sure I have missed something here. Man, I need to re-read again. I mean, because of the separating potion, they are not able to touch each other apart from their hands up to their elbows, right? So how can they kiss? I mean... I must have missed something. I need to re-read. Report Review
Okay... Is the story a bit like... jumping around... or am I the one missing something here?
A bit confused, but still super curious about the next chapter. Report Review
Still loving it!
On to the next chapter! Report Review
Oohh... I'm totally loving it! Totally!
Now, the next chapter... Report Review
Oh, oh, oh... A good start! Enjoyed it very much. ^^ But the scene where Draco slapped Hermione... oh, well, he was evil in the first place, so it would be terrible if he suddenly went all nice and polite with her, I suppose. Haha...
Now, on to the next chapter... Report Review
This was a tad confusing but nevertheless I am enjoying it. Report Review
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