Poor Remus! I feel just awful for him. But the one-shot really seemed to capture how he feels.Author's Response: Yeah, Remus has it hard. Thanks for the review! :) Report Review
First off, I would like to congratulate you on finding such a great sone. It worked out fairly well, considering that it made sense to me in the end.
All right then. In the beginning, you misspelled conscience. I liked that he feels intimidated by the moon, whether it be new, waxing, or waning. The fact that you make him feel so betrayed by Peter as to want to kill him on the spot of killing him is also great, but at the same time, you give him a ray of hope to cling on to.
Very unique. Ace story as well.Author's Response: I'm glad it makes sense. That's my most difficult barrier with stories. ;) Ah, yes, I noticed that. I'm glad you enjoyed it. Thanks for reviewing! :) Report Review
A very interesting Remus centered fic. I like the way you travel through his various thoughts and help the reader experience his woes, very enjoyable.Author's Response: Thanks very much! :) I'm glad you found it enjoyable, I enjoyed writing it. Report Review
Poor baby. I know the feeling. One of these days hun, one of these days. It was good, you're good at what you do.Author's Response: Thank you very much! I'm happy people can relate to him (though I wish they wouldn't have to). :-) Report Review
I thought it made a lot of sense I loved how you depicted Remus' pain it was lovely. Makes you know what it feels like to be a werewolf. My favorite line was this
My ray of hope, I see. A poorer pun would've picked a pocket, you fool, I thought. `GOOD STUFF!!!!Author's Response: Thanks! You've no idea what your reviews mean to me, Mag! :) I'm happy you liked it and I'm over joyed to hear that I got that effect with it. Once again, thanks so much! =) Report Review
this is an excellent story. i love remus angst stories, they're very fitting, well i love angst stories eitherway. you're a good author, keep writing and i'll keep reading.Author's Response: Thank you! I know what you mean. Which is one reason why I adore Remus angst. =) Report Review
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