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Review #1, by swishy It Only Hurts When I'm Breathing

13th April 2005:
hahahah- that was not funny. YOU CAN"T DO THAT TO ME!!!

Author's Response: *evil laughter* This is but the tip of the ice berg.... mwuahaha! I hope you enjoyed the chapter! The next one should be out soon!

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Review #2, by kim [who needs logging in?] It Only Hurts When I'm Breathing

4th April 2005:
no, i didn't see that coming.... and you BETTER not make everyone wait a month! ugh. unlike me... lol. anyway, i loved it!! i especially loved ""What happened? Did you see something shiny?" Leah asked innocently. He narrowed his eyes at her." shiny... shiny objects are DISTRACTING, stella, i don't blame harry :) keep up the excellent work. i left a comment on your blogspot, by the way. <3 kim

Author's Response: Ohh! THanks Kim! Yeah, I like that line too...I guess im too good for my own good sometimes. Anyway, can't wait for your next chapter! *cough hint gag splutter nudge wink* I'm much too tired for a lengthy response....but I'll talk to you later! <3 stella

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Review #3, by xxfalingxstarsxx A Little Look of the Past

3rd March 2005:
woah very confusing. excellently written but terribly confusing for the limited mind of kim. (my honors teachers will back me up!! *looks around* oh fine claim i'm supposed to be the smart kid *scoff*) you have an amazing vocabulary lol. i have more rants but i think i'll just email those to you and leave this review at: superb. excellent. amazing. fantastic. terrific. and, of course, BLOODY BRILLIANT! <3 kim

Author's Response: Aww, thanks Kim!!!! Glad to know that I didn't completely give away what I was...can't think of the right word...foreshadowing? Sure. Lol, I'll be sure to check my email for that rant! Thanks so much, chapter 10 is in the making, and is going to be filled with LOTS of drama....*evil laughter*

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Review #4, by swishy A Little Look of the Past

3rd March 2005:
how happy... good!! UPDATE SOON!!!

Author's Response: Happy....? *stars cackling evily* I meant for it to foreshadow a bunch of drama... I MEAn. Yes. How peachy. Lol, anyways, thanks SO much for the reviews!! Part....uhh...well I forget which I am on, but the next chapter should be up soon!

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Review #5, by Mocosa Back To The States Again...

2nd March 2005:
thses is great*keeps on reading the next of the chapters*

Author's Response: Thanks so much! I'm glad you like it and it makes you want to keep reading!

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Review #6, by xxfalingxstarsxx The First Encounter of Many Yet to Come

1st March 2005:
Hey there Stella! I'm attempting to catch up with your series, as I seemed to have lost track of where I stopped since last time and had to start all over... and now I've become too lazy to read the next two chapters but ANYWAY!! I absolutely love the fic, and it sounds so much better than my first few chapters!! (I was recently re-reading them and now I'm like "why on earth did I write like that?!") People need to review!! This fic is too good to be only getting such a small amount of reviews. You're so talented, it needs to be appreciated. *goes around screaming for everyone to read Stella's fic* hehe well sorry about the long review, maybe I should just use e-mail now huh? ttyl <3 Kim

Author's Response: Awww, thanks Kim!!! I'm glad I'm not a complete failure. The 7th grade language arts class is way too easy... I know what you mean though! I went back and read chapter 2 or 3 and couldn't believe what I wrote. I even like confused there with their...my ultimate pet peeve. Anyway, thanks so much for the feedback! I signed on and saw that I had 13 reviews...that made my day. Just a while ago I only had 10, then I signed on and had 3 more!! But speaking of which, I am definitely going to recommend your story... <3 stella

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Review #7, by swishy Hiding in the Clamors of Denial

14th February 2005:
confusing but very good!! UPDATE SOON!!!

Author's Response: Thanks!!!! Soon enough things will be clarified, so it won't be as confusing. (Let's hope its the good kind of confusing...)

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Review #8, by Rachel The First Encounter of Many Yet to Come

20th January 2005:
Hey good chapter. Your plot is coming along excellently. I only have a couple suggestions. Well actually I only have one. Your word coice could be much better. Oh, and were Tonks and Moody so unconcerned about Leah's disappearance. I mean she's almost as important as Harry, right? And if he suddenly went missing they wouldn't just be sitting on their butts eating breakfast. Another thing that irked me was that Leah wasn't even questioned by the Order about her disappearance. And I don't think that disscusion with Tonks counts much. Wouldn't Dumbledore want to know about it. Wouldn't he want to question her immediately so he could plan a proper course of action. Well anyway thats just what I thought. I'm sure you have your reasons for what you wrote you are the author after all. Hope the critiscism wasn't too harsh and that it was helpful.

Author's Response: I do totally see your point with that, and I agree, my word choice could be better. There will be a reason why the Order was so unconcerned about Leah's disappearence, and another reason why they didn't immediately interrogate Leah was because she was in a pretty bad condition.

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Review #9, by swishy Parting of the Ways...

19th January 2005:
that is super good!!!! I REALLY REALLY REALLY REALLY REALLY REALLY REALLY REALLY REALLY REALLY REALLY REALLY REALLY REALLY REALLY REALLY REALLY REALLY REALLY REALLY REALLY REALLY REALLY REALLY REALLY REALLY REALLY REALLY REALLY REALLY REALLY REALLY REALLY REALLY REALLY REALLY REALLY REALLY REALLY REALLY REALLY REALLY REALLY REALLY REALLY REALLY REALLY REALLY want you to update!!!!! also, i have a thought, how about lee/leah goes to voldie's house and harry gets a vision and goes to save her and leah is like, what the crap!!! oh yes, that would be good!! JUST AN IDEA!!!!

Author's Response: THANK YOU SO MUCH! That just made my day (What's left of it- its nearly 8pm where I am at). I actually submitted a chapter yesterday and am waiting for it to get okayed by HPFF. Anywho, that is a really good idea about Leah and Harry, but, *cackles manically* I already have thought of a pretty good idea to make Harry and Leah realize just HOW similar their lives have become. But you never know...

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Review #10, by Hush Parting of the Ways...

8th January 2005:
Great start. Your story is really original. I hope it picks up soon though.

Author's Response: Thanks for the feedback! The next chapter is when my whole plot picks up and starts rolling. The last chapter was a transitional chapter, and I truthfully didn't like it too much...

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Review #11, by The Godess of Lupine What Could Have Been

6th January 2005:
This is a good start but from what I read in your bio it sounds more like you are in it for the reviews than for the readers...

Author's Response: Yeah, I know that sounds a bit selfish of me, but the way that I figure it is this: Nearly 70 people have read the first chapter, and yet, only 3 reviewed it. Same goes for the rest of them. I mainly am posting on here for positive feedback, constructive criticism, and what they think of the story. I honestly don't know what people think of it when I don't hear back from them, or if they don't like the style, or had some opinions of how I could improve my writing, which is the main reason why I am posting on this site. I hope that isn't too conceited...

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Review #12, by Hush Dear Diary...July 31, 1997

1st January 2005:
It was good! Update soon. Hurry, hurry, hurry!

Author's Response: Thanks! I'm glad you liked it!

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Review #13, by sam Introductions and Assumptions

1st January 2005:
wow this story is great and very interesting please hurry with the next one!!!!

Author's Response: Thanks so much for the positive feedback! I really appreciate all the reviews I can get. I'm almost done with the next chapter, so it should be out soon!

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Review #14, by Rachel What Could Have Been

1st January 2005:
Yay! I like this one even better than the Quizzilla version. Quizzillas been giving me trouble so I've been thinking about switching to the HarryPotter fanfic site as well like you and firefawn. I'm glad its working out for you.

Author's Response: Thanks so much for reading this version as well! It means a lot to me. I personally like this site much better then Quizilla for numerous reasons. I'm glad that people are liking the story!

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Review #15, by fates_eyes What Could Have Been

31st December 2004:
hmmm i like what you added and changed from your quizilla version! don't keep me waiting long for the next chapter!

Author's Response: I'm so glad that my readers have followed me over from Quizilla! (However many there were...O_o) I'm also very glad that you guys like this version! I have so much that is going to happen, and it isn't like what was happening on Quizilla, so I am glad here no one is allowed to plagiarize!

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Review #16, by allainemoore What Could Have Been

31st December 2004:
wow, this is a fantastic first chapter to the story. very interesting and descriptive...plus, its long too! well, good job and hope you continue writing this. have a happy new year! --allaine =)

Author's Response: YAY! *Dances around happily* My first review! Gosh you just made my day! Haha, anyway, thank you so much for the positive feedback! It really means a lot to me. Thanks so much! And Happy New Year!

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