{reviewid: 2356120, reviewer: 'siriusgirl1'}
3rd June 2010:
This story is off to a great start. I was so into it that I was surprised to find that this was the second chapter when I scrolled down to review! There are a few errors in simple things like capitalization, but you've got most of the mechanics of writing down.
I'm enjoying hearing from Harry in the first person, but Hermione seems too girly to me. She is a feminine character, but so far we haven't seen much of her sheer mental power, which never leaves her, even when she's just hanging around the common room. And I find it hard to come up with a reason for messing around with mistletoe without actually putting it up, so you might want to explain that. That aside, you're doing a spendiferous job and I'm excited to continue reading. 7/10
siriusgirl1
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{reviewid: 938514, reviewer: 'Anna'}
15th March 2006:
nice, well structured piece of writing. five stars for you. :)
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{reviewid: 927790, reviewer: 'msbigbad'}
6th March 2006:
that was just so wow...there are no words. I am crying tears of joy right now it was amazing!!
I was wondering if you'd let me archive the story on my ron and Harmy website, Love Unchained.
http://loveunchained.tripod.com
Please get back to me on this.
And again an amazing story. One of the best I've read in any fandom.
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{reviewid: 927110, reviewer: 'emy'}
6th March 2006:
wicked story loved it so much keep up good work
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{reviewid: 891483, reviewer: 'Shelby'}
6th February 2006:
I think it was great, but I think you should make a sequel about what is supposed to happen with the rest of the school year and the rest of their lives. Maybe even a bit of what happens between Harry and Ginny now. I dont know, it is just a suggestion, you dont really have to... So anyway, wonderful job!! lots of love, shelby ;) LOL
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{reviewid: 856414, reviewer: 'cool%20teen'}
13th January 2006:
in just a word.....................................................FANTASTIC
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{reviewid: 822915, reviewer: 'moonlight_singer'}
22nd December 2005:
Oop's sorry, I meant "IT" was great , not me!
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{reviewid: 822913, reviewer: 'moonlight_singer'}
22nd December 2005:
I think i was great. And it was so sweet! : )
"* “Ron…I’m sorry, I think it’s adorable!”
“I don’t want to be adorable!” He whines. *"
lol, so cute!
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{reviewid: 822824, reviewer: 'moonlight_singer'}
22nd December 2005:
Oh boy, this is going to be good : ) *moves on to the next chapter*
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{reviewid: 821417, reviewer: 'zabeth716'}
21st December 2005:
Oh my gosh I love this story!!! Write more!
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{reviewid: 807537, reviewer: 'XxXCrookshanksXxXP3'}
11th December 2005:
Awwwwwww exactly how it should be! Ron and Hermione and Harry and Ginny confessing their feelings! Perfect ending!
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{reviewid: 788843, reviewer: 'ariella'}
28th November 2005:
i'm reading your story again! this is my third time. i really enjoy R/H diary fics or fics from different POV (aka harry, ginny, ron...) any way, great story!
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{reviewid: 784968, reviewer: 'Shingy'}
26th November 2005:
nice one! Comical!
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{reviewid: 765103, reviewer: 'beating_faster'}
10th November 2005:
that had to be the sweetest ending..ish thing...the writing was greaat...you make it look so easy, but yea, i know it's not. anyway, i'm gonna go relish in the thought of that ending again...and i'm in love with that last quote of ron's...
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{reviewid: 764603, reviewer: 'beating_faster'}
9th November 2005:
pretty awesome first chapter...very well written...i'd read till the end of the series..but i've got dance...
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{reviewid: 718507, reviewer: 'iloveron14'}
3rd October 2005:
ONE WORD. loveitsomuch!!! hahaha
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{reviewid: 718489, reviewer: 'iloveron14'}
3rd October 2005:
"you scare me sometimes"..Love that line!!! hahah
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{reviewid: 718457, reviewer: 'iloveron14'}
3rd October 2005:
it just keeps getting better and better..=)
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{reviewid: 718452, reviewer: 'iloveron14'}
3rd October 2005:
haha..=D you are GOOD. that's all i can say.
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{reviewid: 718448, reviewer: 'iloveron14'}
3rd October 2005:
haha..really funny..i liked the fact that it is from Harry's POV this time, makes it more balanced i guess..=)
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{reviewid: 703838, reviewer: 'firefawn'}
21st September 2005:
Heh this chapter was hilarious! As was the story! I'm on my way to class so will come back to leave a more thorough review later, however if you leave the story here it is great! But perhaps an epilogue, or a one-shot about what is going on in the hospital wing with Ginny or Harry could come after this chapter. I think it would be rather comical to have them walked in on. Either way great work!
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{reviewid: 679897, reviewer: 'ParisRadcliffe'}
3rd September 2005:
I think you should put up more chapters!!!It's really good!!!
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{reviewid: 664563, reviewer: 'lonelyeyes'}
24th August 2005:
plz plz plz plz make a sequal!!!!
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{reviewid: 660867, reviewer: 'lily_07'}
22nd August 2005:
wow. that was so good. i am such a huge ron/hermione fan. this is one of my favorite fan fics.
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{reviewid: 656956, reviewer: 'BloodyThing'}
20th August 2005:
Hey, that was cute! And really well written for a fluffy-ish story. At least...that's the vibe I'm getting so far. I've read some of your other stuff too...so funny! It's exactly what I need right now. So, yeah...thanks. Go RON/HERMIONE SHIPPERS!
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