{reviewid: 1602942, reviewer: 'firefawn'}
29th August 2007:
Excellent story. :) I'd elaborate but have to run to class, however I really enjoyed reading it.
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{reviewid: 1602927, reviewer: 'firefawn'}
29th August 2007:
Hrm...this chapter ends on an unfinished sentence, so I am unsure about whether there is more to the chapter that got deleted, or if it were just the word thought. *shrugs* Either way it was a nice chapter. A few grammatical errors again, but nothing a little editing wouldn't fix It's hard enough to write the darn things (the chapters), let alone to reread them, so I completely understand. Anyways, I liked the snowball fight a lot. This is turning into a nice, easy read, and that is definitely a good thing. It's the type of story that one reads when still feeling a bit sleepy in the morning, or that they would read as a nice "pick-me up" after a long day. Great work on that because there are not nearly enough stories like this out there.
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{reviewid: 1602912, reviewer: 'firefawn'}
29th August 2007:
Well I'm certainly glad that you decided to make this a multi-chaptered fic, if the first chapter is anything to judge by, because it is fantastic! It is fluffly, light, and humorous, like watching Comedy Central while eating perfectly made pancakes. ;) lol Sorry, couldn't resist and I am eating pancakes at the moment after all. But seriously, this story is wonderful. There is one spot where "their" should be "they're" but I make that mistake a lot too when typing fast, and asides from that the chapter is really, really well written. 10/10
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{reviewid: 1574432, reviewer: 'Redmudder'}
14th August 2007:
A beautiful story. I really enjoyed it.
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{reviewid: 1435385, reviewer: 'Brenda16'}
27th May 2007:
I like this story... It's cute.. update soon please . cant' wait to read more.
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{reviewid: 1337324, reviewer: 'Weasley%20Brothers'}
11th March 2007:
I can't wait to see where they are going!!! GREAT CHAPTER!!!
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{reviewid: 1337305, reviewer: 'Weasley%20Brothers'}
11th March 2007:
This was a good chapter, I love the idea of the snowball fight!!
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{reviewid: 1337300, reviewer: 'Weasley%20Brothers'}
11th March 2007:
Aw! That is so sweet!!! I loved this chapter!
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{reviewid: 1334986, reviewer: 'Weasley%20Brothers'}
9th March 2007:
I really liked tis chapter and the way Harry and Ginny's relationship was approached.
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{reviewid: 1334701, reviewer: 'Weasley%20Brothers'}
9th March 2007:
I read this story before I got involved with the whole reviewing thing, but when I did start again, I had to re read the story and review!!
GREAT CHAPTER!!
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{reviewid: 1322395, reviewer: 'Lana'}
26th February 2007:
I love this story. it kept my attention and that is hard to do.
Good Job!!
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{reviewid: 1243723, reviewer: 'Weasley%20Brothers'}
28th December 2006:
I loved this chapter, but it left me wondering!!!
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{reviewid: 1243718, reviewer: 'Weasley%20Brothers'}
28th December 2006:
VERY GREAT chapter!!! They have really good relationships!!!
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{reviewid: 1243707, reviewer: 'Weasley%20Brothers'}
28th December 2006:
I like seeing the story through different prespectives.
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{reviewid: 1243703, reviewer: 'Weasley%20Brothers'}
28th December 2006:
This was a really sweet chapter!!! I loved it!!
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{reviewid: 1240131, reviewer: 'Alluring_Twilight'}
24th December 2006:
Brilliant start to the story. It really captured my attention.
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{reviewid: 1202055, reviewer: 'Reading%20Fool'}
20th November 2006:
Great story. Can't wait to read what comes next.
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{reviewid: 1201379, reviewer: 'Reading%20Fool'}
20th November 2006:
on to the next.
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{reviewid: 1201368, reviewer: 'Reading%20Fool'}
20th November 2006:
on to next chapter.
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{reviewid: 1201352, reviewer: 'Reading%20Fool'}
20th November 2006:
Great one but I want to read the next now.
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{reviewid: 1201346, reviewer: 'Reading%20Fool'}
20th November 2006:
Good on to the next chapter.
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{reviewid: 1159559, reviewer: 'thegoldensnitch'}
10th October 2006:
Hi
i really liked your story though i would have liked more!!!!!!!!
but it was a really good story
thegoldensnitch
Author's Response: Thanks and if you take a look at my other stories they have a little bit of the same kind of stuff in them...
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{reviewid: 1152462, reviewer: 'Lily%20Jane'}
2nd October 2006:
Wow..very cute. I'm sorry I haven't commented your other chapter..but I was to into the sotry to stop and take breaks to comment..haha. The story was absolutly perfect. Very good writing! Keep up the great work!
Author's Response: Thanks and I am happy you are enjoying it.
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{reviewid: 989645, reviewer: 'liver'}
16th May 2006:
i loved it it was so sweet
Author's Response: thanks, i enjoyed writing it.
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{reviewid: 961344, reviewer: 'justme_88'}
17th April 2006:
aaaaaaw... That was wonderfull! I loved it.. I almost cried at the end, it was so romantic...
Author's Response: Thank you...glad you liked it and remember I have several others on my author's page. ENJOY!!!
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