This was pretty bad...eurgh

Author's Response: I suppose, but why review it with a bad? I didn't need nor care to hear that. If it was bad, you should have stopped reading.

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great plot... this is really great!

Author's Response: thanks!

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wow great plot wow wow, really makes me think, you can do alot with this story, but once again i urge use the plot to the fullest by adding description!

Author's Response: you and descriptions, heh, I'll see if theres any places I could add descriptions.

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YAY! Now that it all makes sence I will tell you my view on this. I know that I've said it a hundred times before, but a recomandation for being a better writer is detail. I think that you are a fabulous writer as it is and I really hope that I will be able to read your creations as you progress. I am used to reading Tolkien though, so I'm just used to overwhelming detail. Great story and I hope you keep writing!

Author's Response: Damn Tolkien ruining all the things for other writers.

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NOW it all makes sence! so I know I'm not losing my mind. I think. O.o

Author's Response: Well that depends are you thinking your losing your mind?

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Im still confused. Will you explain it sometime soon? Nevermind, I'll go read the next part.

Author's Response: I will, well you know that by the end...:D

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So without Vernon and Dudley, Harry wouldn't be...Harry? Im so confused....

Author's Response: Baisically if Harry actually had love and affection, sole doting then he'd be a spoiled brat, so yeah a Slytherin.

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WHAT?!?!?!?! I'm so confused.......

Author's Response: It's all going to be explained...*starts throwing pixy dust.*

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Aww, so sweet. And now everything is back to normal, isn't that lovely?

Author's Response: got to love sappy endings, well I was thinking of doing a short sequel that explains Petunia and Draco's actions, thats still in the banks.

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Hip hip hooray, normality! (If that's even a word)

Author's Response: it is, normality is a word.

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How does this all fit? Hm... interesting story.

Author's Response: the hogwarts train...I'll never tell...mwa ha ha ha

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You really did change this story, if I remember correctly. This does put a refreshing change to the usual though.

Author's Response: thanks

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there's quite a bit of dialogue in this opening chapter. we sort of start off w/ petunia and harry talking nicely to each other- it's just..well, confusing isnt really the right word...but it's just kind of abrupt...i think if u start off w/ more descriptions of the settings, how harry's feeling and stuff at the moment, kind of ease the reader into the the sudden change in world.. u know? in terms of style though, I think you're doing great. grammar's up to snuff, and the dialogue's written great.

Author's Response: Thanks, I kind of wanted to throw the reader in, only because that's how Harry feels, he's disorientated and doesn't know whats going on, more of a real world stance.

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awww lovely ending. Adhar x

Author's Response: Thank you for your review!

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Yay! All the chapters at once, great! Love the story, xox

Author's Response: heh, yeah they let me post them all aren't they nice?

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Awww... cute! I was nearly right, I guessed somthin about time, lol! Great story, lots of luv, ~Gold Pheonix~ xox

Author's Response: Thanks so much!

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Awww, that was a really sweet ending to this. It was really cool the way that you had Dumbledore seem the same in both places while everything else was different. There were a couple of grammar problems in this chapter (I think you forgot to end one of the sentences near the middle), but otherwise it was very well done. :-)

Author's Response: I can't quite remember what was going through my head but I think I had Dumbledore explain that truly powerful wizards aren't effected by the spell, which explains Dumbledore, a bit. Thank you so much for all your glowing reviews!

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Hermione always knows the answers, doesn't she? Once again, this is a very interesting story to read - extremely creative and original. Everything flows well, especially the dialogue. I wonder why Harry's under this spell, though. Off to read the rest!

Author's Response: I don't think I ever explain it, he he, just more material for other stories.

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This is wonderfully done! I mean, I don't know whether to feel sorry for Harry or laugh out loud at the craziness of it all. You've captured the characters really well, from Hermione's favourite book to Draco's spoiled boy attitude. I can't wait to continue reading this!

Author's Response: Thanks, your making me grin!

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Powerful chapter! The part with Hermione was so intense and the ending was terifficly done. This is a really exciting story - Harry the "Prince of Slytherin" is an interesting thing to think about. It could have happened... Anyway, great story!

Author's Response: Thank you so much, it was just an odd little idea that popped up in my head one day.

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How did you get three chapters up in the time span of me getting my second chapter up? You must so be a witch. That is the only reasonable explanation. (i'm being sarcastic and a bit ADD here since I just ate about ....I dunno, 12 cccookies...ha)

Author's Response: well I'd written four chapters in one day but they only accepted one, sigh, but yeah I'm a witchy kind of witch! Thanks so much for sticking it through!

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YAY YAY YAY YAY YAY YAY!!! (i'm speechless, honestly)

Author's Response: Thanks, I didn't know what people were going to think

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Yay, three more chapters for me to devour, oh boy!

Author's Response: have fun!

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Hermione is so adorable in this chapter. I almost wanted to cry. Your dialogue is very realistic and it radiates such a sense of...hopelessness that well, makes me want to cry. (boo hoo) Love this chapter, and am hoping you will update ridiculously soon!

Author's Response: heh I just submitted the last three chapters to be validated, and then it will be complete.

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YAY!!!!! I luv this story!!!! Update it soon, I luv the stuff with Hermione! Is it all a dream??? Or did someone go back in time and change verything? Wow, I'm so excited! lol... Update soon, lots of luv ~Gold Pheonix~ xox

Author's Response: hehe, I guess you'll just have to wait and see whats going to happen.

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