{reviewid: 2615075, reviewer: 'Bambi'}
12th November 2011:
I don't really understand the Dragon part but I really like how you wrote the whole story, how Emma comes and messes with Lily's emotions. That was good. I didn't know that lily plays well with a Quaffle? Does she? Or is that something you made up?
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{reviewid: 2438814, reviewer: 'happy_person'}
22nd November 2010:
it's a pretty great story so far, but you keep on jumping from 1st to 3rd person perspectives, and it can get somewhat confusing at times. other than that, a job well done :)
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{reviewid: 2209345, reviewer: 'Julia'}
3rd September 2009:
that s the most wonderful LIly story I ve ever read. It's purely amazing and I am sad that it's over. You have a great talent to play with words! Is English your native tongue?
ANy further stories in mind?
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{reviewid: 2158779, reviewer: 'Jane_Volturi'}
9th July 2009:
Well, that was a bit unfair on Lily, James got jealoud and now Lily's been dumped, i'd be so annoyed if i were her, sand she's in love with him too, great part anyway, a definte 10/10
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{reviewid: 2158776, reviewer: 'Jane_Volturi'}
9th July 2009:
Ha lol, this was a brilliant chapter. i like this Lily, i dunno, there are so many different versions of her in different fanfictions but i think this is one of the most similar to jk's own.
It's probably the same with Jame's, he's very beleivable so far, you've convinced me to read on though, your paragraphs, i've found to be pretty short, and some of your spelling is a bit off, and you could do with a wider range of punctuation but you can tell you've tried very hard with this chapter and the storyline is also very good, i'll give this a veryu good 9/10, because i loved it but i still feel that there is something missing right at the moment, i also love your banner, it's very pretty.
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{reviewid: 2024355, reviewer: 'girly1393'}
4th January 2009:
I find this truly unfair. You have written not just one, but two amazing stories, hitting the nail on the head with James and Lily in both of them. Both so different, but so similiar. Still, I am in love with your writing style, your voice. And when I read the one shot, I'm positive it will be just as amazing. Thank you, once again, for writing. The world would be a sadder place without your words.
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{reviewid: 2021585, reviewer: '14lilyflowergirl'}
31st December 2008:
EVIL potter! I really can't believe he did that to Lily. Jermeny is only a little bit of a jerk. I can't believe that Potter did that!
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{reviewid: 1876880, reviewer: 'dramaqueen728'}
26th March 2008:
beautiful :]
honestly amazing job
you kept the story flowing and knew when to bring it to a close.
yay for intelligent and eloquent writing!!!
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{reviewid: 1876841, reviewer: 'dramaqueen728'}
26th March 2008:
aww... this is kinda sad!
i really relate to lily in these past couple chapters [actually i'm sure ALL girls relate to her lol] with the whole 'he could never like me' thing
it's nice to know they'll get together in the end... it gives us all hope :] great job!
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{reviewid: 1876816, reviewer: 'dramaqueen728'}
25th March 2008:
i really like the way this is turning out...
the best part is the way you have james/lily set up:
"I said clearly that I was a girl he never would catch into his sticky web. The result? Him trying to prove me wrong, by asking me to go out with him so often I have memorised all his attempts and twists in wording."
i love that there's an actual motive behind it, rather than the typical 'he likes her because shes pretty'
really great job :]
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{reviewid: 1862743, reviewer: 'saphira777'}
13th March 2008:
good job! nice humor. just wanted to mention though, so far i think i like "my reflection" better than this one. i couldn't stop reading that one- i was addicted.
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{reviewid: 1786715, reviewer: 'MissJessx3'}
10th January 2008:
absolutely amazing! i had to read it non-stop it was just brilliant!
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{reviewid: 1762425, reviewer: 'doglover'}
22nd December 2007:
i love it! keep up the good work!
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{reviewid: 1740027, reviewer: 'Rose'}
5th December 2007:
great story! but i don't get the dragon?? like is it real and was it really there? or is lily imagining stuff or does it symbolise something? *confused face* i think i'll reread that bit.
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{reviewid: 1738703, reviewer: 'Louisa'}
4th December 2007:
that was such a sweet story. my favorite fic to read are james/lily and this is one of the best i've read.
i've been reading since 11.30pm (when my movie finished i went net surfing) and now its 1.44 am and im nearly in tears of joy, the story was so sweet. i wish i had my own james! (or sirius!)
I thouroly adored this story, thankyou for a good read!
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{reviewid: 1683076, reviewer: 'ginny_weasley_54'}
24th October 2007:
wow. amazing story.
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{reviewid: 1650866, reviewer: 'prongs%27gal'}
30th September 2007:
That was such a sweet story! I read My Reflection first and I loved it so I figured I had to read your other stuff and I was not disappointed. You are a truly gifted writer.
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{reviewid: 1631430, reviewer: 'Ppa'}
15th September 2007:
So-*sob*-beautiful!*sob*
10/10! ^_^
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{reviewid: 1628267, reviewer: 'stunned_writer'}
13th September 2007:
YAH it is good i love it you sould right more stories!
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{reviewid: 1626966, reviewer: 'mrsspotter'}
13th September 2007:
yeah it was great. i happened to agree with sirius in this chapter though. a bit too fluffy.
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{reviewid: 1605937, reviewer: 'Charisma_tn'}
31st August 2007:
I think she should've been more angry at him for reading her private thoughts. She went from hating him to loving him a little too quickly. She forgave a little too quickly. Also, all her friends from the beginning of the chapter disappeared.
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{reviewid: 1605933, reviewer: 'Charisma_tn'}
31st August 2007:
He was an ass for reading her diary, her most private thoughts. That's betrayal. He blackmailed her into letting him read them. He shouldn't be this easily forgiven.
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{reviewid: 1545742, reviewer: 'blackpearl_'}
31st July 2007:
Oooh... I'm curious. Is the dream real? I couldn't figure it out...
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{reviewid: 1545729, reviewer: 'blackpearl_'}
31st July 2007:
OMG! Only one more chapter... Wowzers.
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{reviewid: 1545716, reviewer: 'blackpearl_'}
31st July 2007:
Oh my oh my!! *tears hair out* this is getting mighty complicated...
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