Just finished, and am at a loss of what to do with my time now! Didn't review on the other chapters, because I thought I would wait until the end. Loved every word, especially this end chapter where everything was sorted out!
Loved all of the new characters - especially Adea! So creative! The links to most of the dresses don't work now, but that's okay :) You can still imagine the dresses and the girls in your mind - after all, isn't that what your meant to do when reading?

Well, once again, well done on writing an amazing story!!! :)

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Okay well i just finished the story, i havent reviewed after every chapter cos i thought id just wait till the end seeing how it was completed.
I really really enjoyed your story i have to say! I think all the characters were done really well and i just liked it :-) t was ovbiously sad in the eppilogue that you hear about all the sad stuff that happens in the future but i wish you had maybe talked a bit about james and lily and what happened, oh and you didnt mention peter at all in the end which was a bit sad.. Though i dnt really get him.. (does anyone really?)
But enough of the negative because i really did like your story, im trying to pick a fave character... But i just cant! But i LOVE the way jane was lunas mother! Tho the fact that she died thinking her true love was a trator was so sad!!!
Well done on your story, it was great writing :-)

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its so sad that all of the links are expired :( i really would have loved to get the visual aspect of your story as well.

but all in all, I'm so thankful i stumbled upon this.

you have great talent, as I'm sure you well know. stick with it, and like Sirius is to James, it will never fail you.

go strong and live hard, and make sure to write more so that i can come along as well.

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i LOVED this chapter!! especially the caring side of Sirius.

LOVE.
and I'm very excited to see where James and Lily go, especially since i just faced almost the exact situation literally a week ago.

so glad i found this story, as it has made my Mundane Monday exponentially better!!

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i'm so glad i stumbled upon this. loving the characters, dialogues- and everything!!

can't wait to continue :)

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Just wanted to say that I love Adea's character!

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i really love your stories. And just a heads up the ravenclaw tower has no password it only asks you a question and you have to answer it as wittily as possible or as wise for that matter. but other than that its perfect.

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Yay, James and Lily are friends! Hopefully not long! 10/10

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Good Job with your story (:
just wondering, you said James got a silver arrow broomstick for Christmas, but didn't he already have one that he used to get up the staircase to the girls' dormitory?
anyways, can't wait to read more!
-Rose

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FREAKING LOVED THIS STORY!

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Very good so far :) loving it and looking forward to read the rest :)!! xxx

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OH MY GOD OH MY GOD OH MY GOD! Snowflake Jane Swales is Luna's MOTHER! After Sirius is arrested she must marry Xeno Lovegood and they have Luna! HOLY SHAAOUT! ugh I feel bad for Sirius but i don't really like him after the end of this chapter! UGH I STILL CAN'T GET OVER THAT JANE (might be) IS LUNA'S MOTHER!!!

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Loved your story. Soon my first chapteer frrom my first fan fic will go up. Can you please read it. And leave a review. I love your story. Especially Adea, shes how I would want to be. Quiet and unnoticed. I try, but fail. So, please check out my story. Its gonna be called ffrom then on, and my name is LilyLookALike. Thanks.

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OMG! THIS IS THE SADDEST THING I EVER READ! KAYLA AND REMUS? NO MORE?! JANE AND SIRIUS? NO MORE?! JANE DEAD? ITS SO SAD! U MUST HAVE CRIED WHILE WRITING UP THIS CHAPTER!

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I love it!
It is much better than some other stories. Especially if you said this is your first fanfic!
GOOD JOB!

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This story is one of the most sweetest I've ever read... and made me ache for Lily and Jane.
I loved the tweak in the story - making Jane Luna's mother. But in the series Luna's father is Xenophilius, not Oscar, Lovegood.
Nevertheless, the story's great, and I loved Adea a lot! Waqar was sweet too.
Great going, wudnulike2know! Keep writing!

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good, but the links aren't working. the correct pages are not there, so could you please post pictures, maybe? tanks!

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This was a great story. Keep up the good work.

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This is great so far. Keep up the good work.

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hey.. i hav read ds story once olready.. readin agn.. bt sumhow iss baari kuchh ajeeb lag rha h.. hav u been editing? viase u Indian or what?

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ok so i just started reading... ok well by just started i mean i'm already this far, but haven't been following as you update... i swear jane turns out to be luna's mom or something... they are so much alike!

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lol yes the song was crap, but its ok :) the chapter is good

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loved it :)
sixth sense haha awesome!
lol your sorting hat song wasn't the BEST one i've read, but it was pretty close to it!
much better than what i could do :)

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First attempt at fanfic :O
WOW. this is AMAZING!
can't wait to keep reading!
very excellent first chapter :)

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aww. . . that was an amazing ending. . . veige but amazing just the same. . . it was bitter sweet and i loved it i dont think you could have ended it any better! amazing story . 10/10

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