Oh thank god. For a second I thought Hermione was going to die and i would have never forgiven you.

Author's Response: I would never have forgiven myself...

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wow, just from this first chapter i can tell that you are a great writer and i can tell that i am going to be pulling an all-nighter to read this. Hopefully I won't fail my final for reading this instead of studying.
P.S. if you have or ever write a book please email me so i can read it. email me below.

Author's Response: I'm glad you like the story but please don't fail any finals because of it! :) I am writing a book, but I have also completed a script and am moving into preproduction to get it filmed. I can't post links, but here is the address to my public FB page with the . and / spelled out... check it out and like for updates about all aspects of my career... my real name is Kris by the way :)
www(dot)facebook(dot)com(slash)#!(slash)pages(slash)Kris-Williamson(slash)443820389044174

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Surprise party nice touch

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An astounding story from an astounding author. I read the
whole thing in 3 days, which for me is an enormous
achievement, but just shows how much I crave this story,
and it's constant twists and turns. I feel that this could
easily have been a valid replacement to the Half-Blood
Prince in my eyes, and I certainly found the story more
interesting. I also loved the fact you have the bravery and
nerve to kill off some of the most-loved characters, which
takes great courage, and I expect caused serious abuse on
your part. I also appreciate how Dumbledore wasn't
murdered in your tale, as it allowed you to slowly question
his morality and beliefs, and whether he truly is the good
guy he is made out to be. Overall this is an amazing piece of
writing, and I feel I will struggle to find many possible
improvements to your tale. I will be heartily recommending
this to all, and I very much look forward to your next
installment.

Harry Potter and the Ring of Mykele 10/10

Mr White
You may try to find an account of the name Mr White to
reply to this, but I'm afraid I must dissapoint you, as no
such account will be found. Good Day to you, and know your
writing and dedication to the story is always appreciated, so
in my eyes no reply will be needed, just know how much I
value your writing ability.

In Dreams, we enter a world that is entirely our own.

Author's Response: I know you said you don't require a reply, but I just wanted to say thank you for all the kind things you said, it feels wonderful to know the story is appreciated. Thank you very much :)

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Loved this chapter more than the others, because of the similarities between JKs and your style especially in the Diagon Alley scene with the confrontation between Harry and the Slytherins. The cliffhanger was also very well used, and I look forward to the next chapter.
Mr White

Author's Response: :) Happy you're continuing to enjoy the story! It warms my heart to know that readers are liking what they're reading (especially since writing is one of four careers I currently have). Hope all continues to go well in your reading... lots of controversial decisions on my part coming up in the next few chapters that others either love or hate, can't wait to see your take on it all. Thanks for reading!

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Liked it a lot, and you have a writing style similar to Rowling. The only thing I disliked was the use of the term "screwed this up", which gave it an informal and slangy tone. Other than that I enjoyed it a lot and will likely be reading the rest of this story

Author's Response: Well I'm glad you like it so far! As to the casual slang, I've realized reading back that I put alot of my own dialogue and sayings in these character's mouths so you're bound to see more like it. Sorry if it takes you out of the story but I guess it's just my writing style :) Looking forward to hearing any further thoughts you may have as you read, thanks for giving the story a try!

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What is up with odd words that don't actually exist, and the following phrase: Hermyi.. Hermon... bloody hell, why didn't they call you something simple, like Janet

Am I missing someting?

Author's Response: I've checked out some other stories... they all have words changed and that Janet phrase... my guess is this is an April fools joke by the admin. Things should be back to normal tomorrow.

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NO! I'm giving you 1/10 because YOU killed NEVILLE!

Author's Response: Then you're really not going to like who I kill off next :) But all I can say is it serves a purpose to the story... would it make you feel better to know that he comes back I think once in this story and a few times so far in the sequel? Neville, dead but not forgotten :)

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I like it. I know it's complete, but in England words such as neighbor are spelled neighbour. Colour, flavour, favour, honour, rumour and favourite are also some examples for you! Also Sirius was officially Sirius "Padfoot" Black III.

Author's Response: Yes, you are actually not the first to point out this discrepancy to me. As you may have guessed from my spelling of those words, I'm American and so I didn't really think about it when I started writing even though, as a fan of many British authors, I was aware of the differences. I've been toying with the idea of going through and changing everything to make it more authentic but with still writing the sequel, my own writing and my job I haven't had the time for small edits like that and have stuck only to large changes or additions. Hopefully someday I'll have the time. I have also noted your correction of Sirius's name, of which you are the first to point out :)

Glad you're liking the story so far, hope you continue to enjoy it. Thanks for reading and for leaving your thoughts!

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Wow! Cho is DEVIOUS! I know, I know, she is following orders, but still.!

Author's Response: Oh just wait... Cho makes a few appearances in the sequel as well and they are just as devious

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I knew it was Cho! i just knew it

Author's Response: Congrats :) Guess you figured me out...

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How did Luna know? Hm. Cho Chang is fishy. Will Hermione be murdered next?

Author's Response: Everyone is a target... you never know who might wind up getting killed

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The murderer is Cho Chang.

Author's Response: That's a bold statement :)

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wow! awesome story! I don't get the first question though, can you tell me what it means?

Author's Response: Basically Harry had to pass three tests of his virtues. The first was to test his courage and in order to do this, the woman put him in a situation where he had to show her what he would do if he were threatened to give up the ring... the results are in the next chapter.

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How dare you kill off Neville! Although, you can tell that the people who were supposed to be killed were Hermione and Luna. WHEN WILL WE FIND OUT LUNA'S SECRET!

Author's Response: Patience is a virtue I don't possess either, and yet it is all I can advise here :) All will be revealed even as more mysteries arise... always try to keep them guessing

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Who will die? I have a clever idea... what if Luna is Lily recairnated, or was somehow told all the clues? She seems to know all the answers to the clues.

Author's Response: Luna knows a lot, and there's a very good reason for it. I like your idea, but I went a different way... all will be revealed in good time.

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ARGH!A cliffhanger! It's cool that Luna is playing a bigger role than in the original books, 'cuz Luna is definitly my fav. character. Wonder what the clue is...

Author's Response: Luna has definitely been moved to main character status in my version and if you like her then you're going to love the sequel to this story :)

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Question: Is there a sequel, what is it called, when will you write it, and how are you so talented? :)

Author's Response: Yes, it's called Harry Potter and the Coven of Warriors and is currently a WIP... with 50 chapters I'm only about half done with it, so it's definitely longer and more in depth than this one.

I've been reading and writing about anything and everything since I was 4, and I would very much like to be a writer by trade. I have several of my own projects that I'm working on. Talent is in the eye of the beholder so I thank you very much for the compliment... I truly appreciate feedback good and bad and I hope you continue to like the story :)

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I think Harry can move things with his mind!

Author's Response: That's becoming more clear at this point and definitely comes into play throughout the story and the sequel

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I think Luna can read minds!

Author's Response: You think correctly :)

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Hello! Just wanna say it was a very good chapter and I love the humor to this as well. So far you've got great characterization of the trio and I love love the part of what Harry did to Vernon.

I'll be reading on. :)

Author's Response: Thank you! The part about Vernon is a foreshadowing of other things coming as you'll find out... Hopefully you continue to enjoy the story and continue on to the sequel. Thank you for taking the time to stop and tell me you enjoyed the chapter, I appreciate it greatly :) Happy reading!

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Wow. I haven't read fanfiction in years but when I saw your story I had to go back. Once an addict always an addict I guess when it comes to Harry Potter. Brilliant story so far. I have always loved post OOTP stories as they leave so much room for the author's imagination. Your characterization is great, the plot reads smoothly and has kept my attention well, and I am excited to see where you weave your own version of the magnificent tale of Harry Potter.

Author's Response: Thank you for the positive review, it makes me very happy to know that you're already enjoying the story. Believe me it has become an epic which you'll find out in the sequel especially... I've come to realize this one is definitely just the set up story to get everyone to the point I want them to tell my own story with these characters. I am not a fan of HBP or DH and actually started this story right after OotP came out so I had no idea how the real series would end... now I'm glad I went such a different way. The original series is brilliant, I just didn't agree with the way it ended. Of course, I have no idea how my version will end, it's pretty much chapter by chapter with very little future planning... which is why it's kind of gotten away from me.

Hopefully you'll continue to enjoy what I've imagined and thank you again for taking the time to let me know you like it so far. Happy Reading!

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I like how the story is going so far. I like how you made the Weasley's father minister of magic about time that they had something good happen to them.

Keep up the good work

Author's Response: Thanks, as Arthur will find out here and especially in the sequel, being Minister isn't the easiest job during wartime. Lots of exciting stuff coming up, hope you continue to enjoy the story.

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A nice touch with the surprise birthday.

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So far so good. I like your writing style. I can picture the characters in the scenes.

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