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PLEASE CONTINUE!Author's Response: In time I promise, but well, I'm a bit of a slacker... Don't worry though, I'm almost done with cahpter two I've actually been working on it. Report Review
i think you make things very sudden, like thy're talking and then they're kissing and then she says she'll stay with him but thats all....i just think you should take things a little slower so it wont sound as jerkey and abrupt, if that makes any sense. just my thoughts....update soon!Author's Response: So they kissed, O' well. and they didn't say she never said she'd stay with him. AND in the end of one she doesn't even do anything with him because of Ron. Report Review
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