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Review #1, by xxSTARxx Forbidden Desire

27th December 2007:
This is a good start to your story, and I bet that it could be really good if you continued with it! I don't understand why nobody else has reviewed this, or why you have abandoned it, because it looks as though it is going to be good. If you kept at it more people are probably going to review and like your story.

The Snape/Pearl storyline looks to be interesting, as it's a side of Snape I have never seen explored on here and think it could be a really interesting read.

I like the idea of Ginny and Malfoy, it's so much better and original than the many Draco/Hermione stories on here.

Please continue this if you get the chance as I would love to read more and see where all of this is headed.

All in all I think you have some really good and original ideas.

8/10 (only reason that it is not higher is because the chapter needs to be slightly longer and you need to continue with the story)

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